Between Worlds.
Shallower sages would never permit streams of
night's glittering stardust to detract them from
edging every message with signatured ego.
Meanwhile authentic dreamers reveal
their penchant for embroidering
that which cannot be sewn
and write to impassion
the marvel of sunrise.
True scribes add
zest to twilight,
with gifted
shadings,
coat nature
with word-flow
and paint phrasings
richer by lyrical notes.
To the dreamy romantic
who captures fanciful verse
thanks for bejeweling poems
with tokens adorning the ordinary.
Genuine writers slip outside reality then
spin embellishment with metaphor by time
spent between worlds before weaving melody.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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Awe just Adore The beautiful lines, and the format is quite lovely too!
A wondrous tapestry of a writer’s skills!
A fine write Fay.
Wow your phrasing is creatively awesome and top notch!! I was admiring ' bejewelling poems, signatured ego, and scribes adding zest to twilight', Woww so imaginative and poetically exquisite. The shape is fabulous as well. Kudos.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Wonderful words Fay, and those words are always within us.
Andy
ANGELA here - Good Evening FAY - Thanks for a POEM with such a DIABLOIC shape ! *Everything is Beautiful in its own Way !* Sunrise - Sunset & the whole Natural World ! If One is a True Poet then the sights & sounds of Nature trigger Ones Muse - to fashion Poetic Jewels. Such gems ameliorate the ordinary beyond the imagination of shallower Bards.
Your final TRIPLET is your final word and the lyric
for which we lesser would-be Poets all strive !
Blessings & Love & Joy & Peace
Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !
I have to admit to being sidetracked by the geometry of this presentations mimicry of your very own figure. Such a tiny waist. However, I digress.
- resumes minutes later having calmed down -
dreamers embroidering that which cannot be sewn..... wonder here at the many possibilities of this metaphor for each is a poem itself. and 'bejeweling poems with tokens adorning the ordinary' is something you show to us regularly with your observations of the natural world.
All in all, this is an insight into Poetic Fay for every phrase is a characteristic of your wonderful poetry which we see here on mps daily.
impressive in its ambitious scope, wonderfully creative
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