Poem, LOVE?

AwHec8

Love without Law in us is desolate

Because it is corruptible easily, leading to abuse.

Law without Love in us is amoral

Because it lacks compassionate empathy, leading to destruction.

 

When put together Love & Law

Combines in us the most spectacular thing of all

Compassionate Desire to Seek Truth

Looking for the Good we all are Uniquely in being Set Free!

  • Author: AwHec8 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 12th, 2020 10:03
  • Comment from author about the poem: What is Love? I mean real downright set us Free, Look for the Good in All type LOVE! For those of you who think I added to this Poem, You are right it was lacking the finishing lines on 2 stanzas.
  • Category: Love
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  • dusk arising

    Methinks there is much about love to learn for you. Love will teach you everything.

    • AwHec8

      Thank You dusk arising, you always keep me on my toes. So to speak. Don

      Yeah, Me Knows I have a lot to learn, as I don't know the half of it. That is why I am always looking for a future Mrs Ex to teach me the other half. LOL!
      Interestingly enough there are times when I could have cheated in my own marriage. Offered up without me looking for another. Thing is when it came down to would I, it wasn't Love that kept me from cheating it was,
      What Was My Word Worth! As in the Law of a a Marriage.
      But I digress because we all are different in a response of illegality. Don

      • dusk arising

        Don. Soon you will stop thinking of love as just that thing we know as romantic love and realise that love is much bigger than that..... if you think about it i bet you'll realise you already knew that but just needed to sort it out in your mind.... romantic love is really just the introduction to beginning to understand love and accept that love is the greatest teacher we have.

        If only more people were feeling more aspects of love then there would be a much finer world society. In that book you have often referred to it tells.. 'love thy enemy'... impossible to do unless you have explored love far beyond just the romantic stuff.......

        I'm thinking you already knew all this but maybe you didn't realise you knew it.

        • AwHec8

          dusk arising I have to say you were absolutely right! Who knew, oh yeah you did.
          I have taken what you said to heart & updated a couple of lines in this here Poem. Thank You dusk. And I do mean that with all my heart. Period. Don

          • dusk arising

            You are a very genuine person Don. I had initially made wrong assumptions about you in our conflict over christianity which i will not re-enter into here. However, on this subject of love, please take a look at mt recently posted "go then" which is a piece about the loss of my brother....

          • orchidee

            Good write Don.

            • AwHec8

              Thank You orchidee. Don

            • Goldfinch60

              Don, true love takes over your life in a way that you will never forget and will always be with you. One day it will come to you.

              Andy

              • AwHec8

                I want to Thank You for another perspective of this topic, Goldfinch60. Don

                What is put out by me is just there to enlighten if someone wants to use it or not use it, pass it along or not. I don’t claim to have hidden knowledge or total Truth, just like you though maybe a piece of it. To say or hint that you do is as much being a hypocrite (gaslighter actually) as telling me that someday I will be as you are, better! All the while being so vague in your statement as to boggle a lesser secure person’s mind. If you have the answer, any one of you, put it out in Poem or Story or Just post it. Instead of 1 day I will be as you, full of what?
                However if you take the simple fact that in this world it is pretty simple. Setting aside the psychopath, sociopath or just plain old criminally insane (mentally out of whack or possession of some kind? maybe) there are basically 2 kinds of People in this world,
                1)Those who have a Loving type Heart, and for lack of a better phrase do dark type things to others from time to time. Whether called out for it or not, That do own up to them in Truth.
                2)Those who have a Dark type Heart, and for lack of a better phrase do loving type things from time to time. Gaslighting others in all reality in their lack of owning up to the Truth.
                As for which 1 I am or you are I still haven’t quite figured that part out so I will wait for the God who is Love, not that Love just flows from Him only, But is it in all its glory to tell me who I am. Pretty much hearing my right name for the 1st time.
                Now if you want to argue/debate over what is Law and what is just rules of this here Earth we will have to make that for another day. Don



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