A million stars to gaze upon
which one belongs to only you?
A million stars to gaze upon
I choose a different one anew
The pale moonlight glowing above
which one belongs to only you?
The one which defines our true love?
The pale moonlight glowing softly
The pale moonlight glowing above
Are you gazing so Loftily
As I point fingers at each star
The pale moonlight glowing softly
I wonder dear just where you are
Am I not your romantic soul?
As I point fingers at each star
So how can I ever feel so whole?
A million stars to gaze upon
Am I not Your romantic soul?
A Million stars to gaze upon
Part Two
The glistening tears in my eyes
The shimmer of my souls sad blues
The glistening tears in my eyes
The one that belongs just to you
Where our memories can combine
The shimmers of my souls sad blues
If only my hopes could align
I could be sitting by your side
Where our memories can combine
Oh! If the heavens could abide
make my dreams a reality
I could be sitting by your side
Then true happiness I would see
A million stars up in the sky
Make my dreams a reality
You wouldn’t want to see me cry
The glistening tears in my eyes
A million stars up in the sky
The glistening tears in my eyes
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Author:
Dove (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 14th, 2020 10:32
- Comment from author about the poem: A Recent poem redone to Follow the formatting rules! Written for my friend who passed away !
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A sensitive write R.
Thank you kindly for the read Orchidee, smilez! The original brings tears to my eyes!
So many unanswered questions when we lose someone dear to us, so we look into the wonderous night sky, where more unanswered questions are found. But there is comfort for confronted with the vastness of the visible universe it's easy to feel the presence of your lost soul as if they were looking down upon your face.... and it's within our nature to demonstrate, one to one, feelings of love and sadness.
It's all there in your post, a lot more poetically though.
Thanks Dusk! We always use to say “ I love you to the moon and back” and thus the heavens is where I look first!
Not a moon shall rise, that shall remind me of her bright eyes”
Thanks for stopping by!
I too look up at the stars and know that My Joyce is up there looking down on me. Looking at the stars is so comforting, after all the stars are holes in Heavens Floor.
Andy
Thanks Andy, blessings to you! Stars are many things, they are maps to kings, stepping stones to heaven, and light to the universe
Thanks for stopping by and leaving your pearls of wisdom!
HOLA ROMANTICA ~ Gracias por esta Poema. Love the theme all our destinies are in the STARS ! I have sussed out the rhyme pattern and will post one soon !
Blessings & Peace & Joy con Amor
Angela - Brain & El Gato Ahumido !!!
Please check *ANYONE FOR TENNIS ?* GRACIAS A & B
Awesome Angela & Brian! Glad you might try the Terzanelle, it’s why I posted the style, as you both have inspired me to try different formats ! I hope someone might break from their pattern of free verse!
Best to the Trio!
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