Trenz Pruca

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On worried wings,
he softly sings
of dreams of fire
and ghostly things
with deep desire.

Comments4

  • Romantic Bloom

    The Rising of the Phoenix!?

    Love the Jingle!

  • Goldfinch60

    Good write Trenz, that desire is within us all.

    Andy

    • Trenz Pruca

      Isn't it though. Thank you.

    • L. B. Mek

      purposely written so that it can be customised in meaning to the experiences and perspectives of each reader,
      wonderfully imaginative

    • Gary Edward Geraci

      Good! Four syllables, five lines, and abbab end rhymes - with this structure you can communicate what the world truly longs for: His Love.



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