SONG FOR SUNDAY ~ PEACE PERFECT PEACE ~ A PANTOUM !

ANGELA & BRIAN



 

PEACE PERFECT PEACE ~ In this dark World of Sin

PEACE PERFECT PEACE ~ By WORK & DUTIES pressed

The Voice of JESUS ~ give us PEACE within

The Love of JESUS ~ whispers all is REST

 

PEACE PERFECT PEACE ~ By WORK & DUTIES pressed

PEACE PERFECT PEACE  ~ With Loved Ones far away

The Love of Jesus whispers all is REST

In JESUS* keeping ~ We are SAFE & so are they

 

PEACE PERFECT PEACE ~ With Loved Ones far away

PEACE PERFECT PEACE ~ Our Future all unknown

In JESUS* keeping ~ We are SAFE and so are They

GOD knows the Future ~ and We are His Own ! 

 

PEACE PERFECT PEACE ~ Our Future all unknown

PEACE PERFECT PEACE ~ In this Dark World of Sin

God knows the Future ~ and We are His Own

The Voice of JESUS ~ gives us PEACE within ~ AMEN !

 

Thanks for visiting comments welcome Love Angela ๐Ÿงก Brian ๐Ÿ’™

 

The HYMN (VIDEO) on which this PANTOUM is based,

was written by E H Bickersteth in 1875 for a dying MAN !      

   

  • Author: ANGELA & BRIAN (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 19th, 2020 08:56
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  • Michael Edwards

    Well constructed - great example of the genre.

    • ANGELA & BRIAN

      BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks UNCLE MIKE ! I like PANTOUMS because the close repetition gives emphasis. Also one can choose lines from a Hymn or A Poem without infringing copyright provided you acknowledge your source. On another SUBJECT did you notice EVERTON FC are now TOP OF the Premier Division League Table ! Early days but they have a very solid Team & A Great Mananger. My Dad is a Lifelong Everton Supporter and He has invited Angela & I for a *Take Away Indian* ! Angela (having been raised in London) is a Chelsea Supporter & of Course (like her PAPA) Barcelona !

      Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
      Love Angela - Brian - Smokey ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐ŸคŽ

    • orchidee

      A hugely comforting write and hymn B&A. Ahh, the 10.10. metre there!
      Not just because we may not like to hear or accept some things that men are saying, but it's true that 'The word of the Lord shall stand for ever'. We are as grass and flowers. Aww - and why they call me a 'worm'?! lol. (I read a little on 'worm theology').

      • ANGELA & BRIAN

        BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening UNCLE STEVE ~ pleased You enjoyed it ! PEACE isa key word in the Scriptures. It is a FRUIT of the SPIRIT so Christians should always be PEACEMAKERS in the Home @ Work & in the Community including the CHURCH ! Paul teaches that Chritsians have *Peace with God* & that the *God of Peace* will be with us 24/7 ~ AMEN !

        Blessing to YOU & YOUR Peaceful PUP
        Spirit Love A & B & El Gato Ahumido ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›

      • Dove

        Amen! Best to the Trio!

        • ANGELA & BRIAN

          ANGELA AQUI - Hola Romantica ! Gracias - pleased you enjoyed it ! We are praying for CALIFORNIA having to face such devaststing Forest Fires as well as well as COVID 19. Are You & Your Family - OK ?

          Blessings & Joy & Peace to You & Yours
          Con Amor A & B & El Gato Ahumido ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›
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          • Dove

            Thanks Angela, the air quality is really bad! No fires quite near, like last year, but definitely so many more! The winds and heat spur them on! Had a minor earthquake too yesterday! Such is Sunny California! The climate change is affecting us! Last week or so we were at 108 or so! Iโ€™m in the southern part of California! The fires are still not contained!

            Anyways, best to you Brian and Smokey! Thanks for asking!



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