Sweetness.

Fay Slimm.

 

 

Sweetness.

 

I see

butterscotch evenings,

red sky honied in creamy sunset,

last light's toffee waves

as sea's olive coverlet changes

to caramel-sepia.

 

I see

twilight's blush streaking

dun-dusk with striped humbug tints,

 candy-silk cloudlets  

sinking in remembered cherry-lips

as dark lights long-ago scenes.

 

I see

treacle-soft secrets       

sealing shy kisses and zest trying

each treasured offer 

of nightly concealment, eagerly

stirring crystallised feelings.

 

I see.

chocolate-smooth dreaming

spicing beach-vows and re-living  

now youth's nectar-need

roused is my sugar-fix while tasting  

again first-love's true sweetness.

 

 

 

 

 

 

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 24th, 2020 03:28
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • L. B. Mek

    I read a wonderfully written description of a mesmeric depiction encapsulating: magnetic attraction, draped in its otherworldly hue,
    'Twilight blushed streaking,
    dun-dusk striped in humbug tints,'

    • Fay Slimm.

      A grateful thank you for this generous comment on Sweetness dear friend. Am delighted you find the description mesmeric.

    • Neville


      Hey... I'm with L.B and never mind the queue .... a guy could wait all summer just for a snifter and that is one helluva image you have posted to go with these nectar like words .. a real turn on if ever there waz ...... N 🙂

      • Fay Slimm.

        Oooh - delighted the write moved you so muchly kind Sir - - well we all need a turn on during these virusy days - eh ? ................ x Fay

      • orchidee

        I see a fine write Fay.

        • Fay Slimm.

          Glad you see fineness in my write on first love dear Orchy.

        • Dove

          Tantalizing and sweet, almost gained a pound with all the sugared love!

          He he! Just kidding! Super colorful memories with the taste of nectar

          • Fay Slimm.

            Yes sweet were the days of first love and nectared the memories -- grateful thanks for your lovely comment dear poet-friend.

          • Goldfinch60

            So many sweets and sweetness in these wonderful words Fay.

            Andy

            • Fay Slimm.

              How glad I am to know you discovered a sweetness in the read dear Andy. Thank you too for your continual encouragement of my attempts at poetry.

              • Goldfinch60

                Fay, you do not ATTEMPT poetry you write poetry in such enthralling ways.

                Andy

              • Trenz Pruca

                Tasty.

                • Fay Slimm.

                  Glad you saw the reason for metaphor in this little tribute to a sweet first-love - - gone but the taste remains in memory........ thank you my friend for your visit and read.

                • Neville



                  I was drawn not like a poultice or a pen might draw one ..
                  .. but by admiration and respect and the ache of a sweet tooth .. near perfect ....on both visits ....

                  • Fay Slimm.

                    You mon ami are kindness itself - thank you ever so much...........x



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