From the top I fall
Once again
In an endless spiral
That hardly ends
The bottom stays warm
From where I keep falling
Oh how I wish I wouldn’t keep returning
- Author: SpiceNoodles ( Offline)
- Published: September 30th, 2020 22:03
- Category: Unclassified
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One day you will conquer that fall a move upward to a great life.
Welcome to MPS.
You keep going down the plug hole, as a 'spiral' of water?!
Yet hopefully not bottomless. It's said that when we reach the bottom, the only way remaining is up! Easy to just say that, I know. More difficult in the experience of it.
there is a rhythm to our pulsed existence, up and down it pumps - round n round our blood flows,
our lives too: seem to reflect that same cyclical jagged inconsistency, in the pebbled paths we traverse, from one day to the next
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