Fay Slimm.

Stalled

 

 

Stalled.


Because each granite-necked minute strangles
desire's set sail shall grief's tongue so anchored
see love's dazzling coast no more ?


Shall a tear-drenched spark within ready breast
not light on horizons new and warm ?

 

Because a mature pearl's glint becomes staved
on death's barrier reef shall this sea-siren wait
to become blind to advances ?


Shall the caged heart's talons gnawing at need
not see night's silk rise unshackled ?

 

Because cinders grow cold when un-bellowed
shall a stacked basket not harbour fresh coals
with flint to spark smouldering ashes ?


Shall stalled life not take a late fur-lined climb
             to tomorrow's state of shared romance ?                

 

Comments9

  • L. B. Mek

    'Shall the caged heart's talons gnawing at need
    not see night's silk rise unshackled ?'
    wonderful imagery and effortless flow adding a dreamy feel to this introspective write

    • Fay Slimm.

      So glad you enjoyed the imagery contained in the verse L.B. - I intended the questions to flow slowly and pleased you caught that feel too. Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment on Stalled.

    • orchidee

      Good write Fay.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Thank you Orchi.

      • Lorna

        A nice hopeful message Fay.........a lot of longing there

        • Fay Slimm.

          Glad you felt hope in the read today Lorna. Grateful too for your in-put to Stalled.

        • Neville


          this is seriously good .. tis ragged and real as they come but with no rough edges ...

          alas I fear one or t'other lover maybe arrived too late to say a proper and meaningful goodbye ..

          ... left cold wanting and waiting .. that is where these words took me today ...

          somewhere off a Cornish coast too, I imagine ....

          • Fay Slimm.


            Glad you felt a reality in today's posting Nev. so your vision of wanting and waiting gave imagination free reign which is as maybe but I count as an honour - - I truly appreciate your deeper reads of my humble efforts and thank you immensely.............x Fay

          • The Uneducated O.A.P

            I always look in Fay, Bit I find commenting difficult.

            • Fay Slimm.

              How kind of you even to look in at my postings and have a read dear friend - - no worries at all about commenting as long as you find the words and the subjects enjoyable for that is what matters.

              • The Uneducated O.A.P

                Thanks for your kind words

              • ANGELA & BRIAN

                ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharing FAY an ODE to TRUE LOVE !

                What can separate us from TRUE LOVE ? NOTHING !
                Strife of Life or Tears or Barriers or Cages of Society
                or Dying Ember ? Whatever the Circumstances - The
                Blaze of True Love can ALWAYS be fanned into an -
                Incandescent Flame !

                We le all your poems FAY and love to comment !- However little time we have to compose & contribute ! MPS is essentialy a TWO-WAY process Contibuting & Commenting & replying ! We both appreciate that - and would see 2 or 3 Poems a week reflecting *An Active Member* ! Most of our Poems are COLLABORATIONS - but we dont always say so !

                Blessings & Peace & Joy with Love
                Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

                • Fay Slimm.

                  Truly grateful for your visit and comment on Stalled dear duo - - am delighted you find value in my efforts at odes on all sorts of subjects and thanking you masses for all your support.

                • MendedFences27

                  One answer to all, and that is NO! "Stall" no longer. Engage, Seek happiness. It is why we all are here. The open heart beats faster than the than the reserved one. Love gives meaning to Life.
                  I'm saving your questions for future reference. - Phil A.

                  • Fay Slimm.

                    Ah - that resounding NO to all those proffered questions in Stalled gives me confidence that the metaphors didn't fail and that you found the ode fairly engaging. Grateful too Phil for your saving the poem and for the wise statement that "Love gives meaning to Life" - Great to have your supportive comments.

                  • Dove

                    A forlorn maiden hopefully shan’t be denied ! A very pleasant ride of deep thoughts,

                  • Goldfinch60

                    There is life, joy and love for us all as we look ahead in our lives. Fine words Fay.

                    Andy



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