Always restless
Always on the move
One more place to be
Another road
Tinted fields flashed by
Mist mountains ahead
Unfolding landscapes
Your hand pulling
Urging mine along
Until you found a hill
I couldn't climb
A place I couldn't
Go just yet
You couldn't stop
I did my best
And so, for now,
You've had to leave me
Here to rest
- Author: Lorna ( Offline)
- Published: October 6th, 2020 04:16
- Category: Love
- Views: 60
- Users favorite of this poem: Fay Slimm., Laura🌻
Comments6
That hill may be a challenge but after your rest it will be easy to climb.
Andy
Good...... I'm ready now. Everyone should know when to leave the party. Even Churchill said he was bored by it all on his deathbed. I know, I know, be upbeat, positive and jolly.
this is one of those that invokes a slow and steady sigh ...
filled to the point of overflowing with a timeless ache ...
that which I understand and know ...
... Neville
Yes I'm good at depression.........
The feel of sad parting oozes through these poignant lines my friend - - must be read over again and now in my list of faves.
Thank you for your fave Fay......... I hope I'm not spreading depression...........
Ohhh, let's leave it then! What's the point going up the hill, if we gotta come down it again? lol.
"Erm, cos it's there, 'tis why we climb it"as some mountain-climbers said.
You have to climb up but you can roll down.............
Yep, let's roll - down the hill I mean, not in the hay! Woof! I started my 'watchdog' Fido barking now. lol.
Love how you wrote this one
Full of emotion
Won't go all cliche on you
Was a bit alarmed by your reply to Goldfinch but that could just be my muddled head
Respect
Thanks for your comment....... your head is just fine..........
Lorna,
Such a heart-rending piece of writing.
If I understand what you’re saying, I’m going to say something that I hope it’ll make you smile...I’m glad you couldn’t climb that hill—not just yet.
Laura🌻
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