Lorna

Bucket List Senryu



I wanted your love

So fabulous I got it

One thing off my list

Comments7

  • Goldfinch60

    Great words Lorna, it was on my list as well and I had it for nearly forty years.

    Andy

    • Lorna

      Weren't we lucky........

    • orchidee

      Good write Lorna.
      I want 100 buckets, that's all! (do shut up Orchi. lol).

      • Lorna

        I'll give you oodles of noodles and buckets of buckets.........

      • L. B. Mek

        innovatively witty, remind me of one by Benjamin Zephaniah:

        Haiku - by Benjamin Zephaniah
        Writing a poem
        In seventeen syllables
        Is very diffic...

        • Lorna

          So funny......... it has since been pointed out to me that Haiku should be about nature and that mine is Senryu because it isn't..... but I'll try again!

        • Saxon Crow

          Nicely written Lorna. What else is on the list...?

          • Lorna

            I think I've got everything! Thanks! Less is more..............

          • Fay Slimm.

            What better to tick off than Lurve dear Lorna......... fun read.

            • Lorna

              https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x9_vhYpR9xo

            • Neville



              superb ... how I wish I was your pen ..

              • Lorna

                My pen is all squished and inky..... be careful what you wish for............

                • Neville



                  Mine is retractable, of course ...

                • ron parrish aka wordman

                  love,peace,happiness is all we need



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