I wanted your love
So fabulous I got it
One thing off my list
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Author:
Lorna (
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- Comment from author about the poem: You inspired me to try a haiku .... I'm seldom this disciplined......... CORRECTED THIS TO SENRYU AFTER FRIEND POINTED OUT MY MISTAKE - Haiku should be about nature...... I'll try that another day.
- Category: Love
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Great words Lorna, it was on my list as well and I had it for nearly forty years.
Andy
Weren't we lucky........
Good write Lorna.
I want 100 buckets, that's all! (do shut up Orchi. lol).
I'll give you oodles of noodles and buckets of buckets.........
innovatively witty, remind me of one by Benjamin Zephaniah:
Haiku - by Benjamin Zephaniah
Writing a poem
In seventeen syllables
Is very diffic...
So funny......... it has since been pointed out to me that Haiku should be about nature and that mine is Senryu because it isn't..... but I'll try again!
Nicely written Lorna. What else is on the list...?
I think I've got everything! Thanks! Less is more..............
What better to tick off than Lurve dear Lorna......... fun read.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x9_vhYpR9xo
superb ... how I wish I was your pen ..
My pen is all squished and inky..... be careful what you wish for............
Mine is retractable, of course ...
love,peace,happiness is all we need
So right!
you`re welcome
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