So dark, I can't find a smile

Poetic Dan

Tonight many tears fell, each one casting the spell

Feeling the past had a future but the present is hell

Many memories to treasure, do I have to much...

Is this a possibility why nothing is ever good enough!

Feeding from this emotional state is all I've ever know

In love with a programed belief to go it all alone

As the ripples I create, never fail to bring devastation

Each snap and vibration, sends my gut into a new dimension

My mind wants to follow as the heart floods up

This is when I looked for my soul and realise...

Have we ever even been in touch? 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 10th, 2020 17:17
  • Comment from author about the poem: I honestly do read your comments but unable to catch all my thoughts to then put them in writing. I never like giving a short reply, unless that's all I can think of.... That's not often! Much peace and respect... Life goes on or not ;)
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  • Goldfinch60

    Very emotive write Dan, you have moved on so much in your life that the good days will outweigh the bad days, we all still have bad days but we also know that the good ones will be there for us.

    Andy

  • Neville


    Listen to the little golden bird Dan .. He is a wise old bird indeed & said it far better than I can ...

  • Crowns4Christ

    just know the mps family is here to support you if you need it.i can feel the raw emotion,dan. here for you melissa crown



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