I don't want to talk, yet I'll sit and write!
I feel like I'm being punished, yet I asked for this life
Gut-wrenching screams tear my inside apart
The ringing in my head is never to far!
Lost in this woodland, that was once meadows so sweet
No matter the amount of rational thinking, I feel emotion rooted in.
Is there something in the night haunting or me
.....
Oh shit, I think I see it but I'll pause before I write the words...
Is it an addiction or wound I'm still unable to heal!
As nothing I've found in this reality, satisfy my void
To cope in those moments when time stands still
I am greatful for everything that I've known
I hope this dark transition can bring me back home!
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I have literally just finished this from the wonderful 3am clock in! After clearing all the snot bubbles I truly feel much better! Never underestimate the power of just letting it go! Openly.. Also and mostly is the support of others, thank you to all that have joined over the years! I'll be back on your roads soon, to absorb your words of wisdom or find the fun! With the moon or morning sun....
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You certainly will be back home Dan and back into that wonderful life that you have been creating over the years.
Andy
Yep like any good schizophrenic today I am in that happy place! Not like tigger, ready to jump in the car window! More like Poo bear, nice and melow...
Always appreciate your time, my poetic fellow!!
'No matter the amount of rational thinking, I feel emotion rooted in.'
such a poignant line,
it was the great Montaigne that stated: 'I speak to paper, as I speak to the first person I meet' and ultimately, this must be the greatest gift poetry yields for those who utilise its healing secrets, as all your writes demonstrate
Your reflection of my melt down is perfect, yes I've always spoke openly.. People or paper!
Time I start reading other people's capers...
Sorry, I do love it 😉
Really appreciate, your time and vibe.
Much peace and respect
You must keep writing .. you have a real and rare talent for expressing how it really is ..
i don't know what your beliefs are,but put your trust into god and ask him for healing,he is there when you need him.great write,i look forward to reading more of your work.thank you dan. melissa crown
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