Sadia Risa Anika

My Dreams

All my life

There is just me and my dreams.

Look at the stars in the sky

It's shining in my dreams.

 

I don't know

When my dreams will come true.

But what i know

Is to give it a try.

 

There may be hurdles

On the path of my dreams.

But what i know,

Is to break all those hurdles.

 

And grab my dreams

So that it does not fly away from me.

I am wondering,

Whether my dreams will ever come true.

 

Even if it isn't

I must not cry.

cause i have tried at least,

once upon a time.

 

Comments3

  • ANGELA & BRIAN

    ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon SADIA welcome to MPS. It is a Proacitive site which operates by reading & commenting on each others Poems - OK ! Thanks for you first Poem it has an elegant Sructure - Five balanced free verse* quatrians - and a Subject DREAMS we can all relate to ! *Dream - Dream -Dream ~ All you have to do is Dream !* More poems please !

    V 1. YES the Stars do capture & reflect our DREAMS5.
    V 2. In my experence when I (32) married Brian (36) this Year ~ All my dreams really did come TRUE !
    V 3. Real LIFE does have HURDLES - BUT we mature by learning to overcome them - One by One !
    V 4. Good Mantra ! WE MUST hold on to ALL our DREAMS !
    V 5. Success - In Life & Love - only comes by Persistance ~ AMEN

    BLESSINGS & Peace to You & Yours
    Love ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛

  • jarcher54

    I'm nearer the end of my dream journey than the beginning. Your bittersweet pondering is moving. Looking back, I suggest never stop dreaming, but live each day with your heart and your head, alert and brave, and when you reach my age you will look back on dreams that came true that aren't exactly what you hoped for but are every bit as wonderful.

  • Goldfinch60

    THose dreams will always be with you Sadia and they will come true, your positivity will make it so.

    Welcome to MPS.



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