The ocean blue
Wave after wave
Calming and beautiful
A Cure for the soul
When one is in distress
Strong and mysterious
Deep are the secrets
And life within you keep
I’d like to take a peak
Your complexity, astonishing
Makes me catch my breath
Humbleness fills within me
Such an extraordinary view
Here by the shore in the soft warm sand
Breathe in and smile at the gift that is you
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Author:
MMadrid (
Offline) - Published: October 21st, 2020 21:16
- Comment from author about the poem: The ocean is one of Gods greatest Gifts, I think we all feel at peace in the presence of the ocean and wanted to write about that in a simple way.
- Category: Nature
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Comments3
Seeing the waves slowly coming towards you shows the care that can be in your life.
Andy
I hadn't really thought about it like that, but nice point. True.
Yes, the sea has a wonderous effect upon all who take time to contemplate in its company. Please have a peep at the piece i posted on 4th October entitled 'the sea' and you will see how i share your feelings for this wonder.
Really enjoyed your poem and the final line is poem all on it's own.
I will definitely go read it, thank you! Appreciate your feed back.
I too share your fascination with the Sea and your picture just leaps-out,
good read
Thank you, appreciate the comment!
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