Beyond Broke

Neville

Beyond Broke

 

She was

true enough

within the context

of believing herself to be

nothing but seriously honest

but other than that, she was quite

seriously deluded, needy and broken ..

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 24th, 2020 10:51
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  • orchidee

    Where ya meeting all these gals? Or is the same gal each time?! lol. I gotta 'get me coat', 'get out more,' and meet some of 'em!

    • Neville


      a gentleman never tells now does he ... it would do ya good though orchidee getting out of your hutch or ya pen or whatever .... thanks for stopping by

      🙂 that's one of my fave albums of all time ... Dark Side of the Moon that is ............................................

    • Fay Slimm.

      Seriously good this concise diagnosis of delusion my friend.............the two final words - "needy and broken" brought sad heartache that this state is so familiar today.

      • Neville



        .................... yes it is a sad reality dear Fay and I fear there is no easy answer or solution to the phenomenon of pseudo delusion ...

        true delusional beliefs whether primary, secondary systematised or unsystematised are often much easier to fathom, respond to and indeed treat ... thank you for your approving perusal my friend..........................

        .... Neville

      • dusk arising

        Many out there are still in need of a repair kit in their later years. I was once deluded enough to consider my heart a repair shop.

        Disallusioned, i threw away my tools.

        • Neville



          I know where you are coming from DA and have a good idea where ya going to ... but hey, we got another hour to play with, so let's make the most of it ... Have a great Sunday my friend ...

        • Goldfinch60

          Delusion is a disease which can be mended with the medicine of love.

          Andy

          • Neville



            Your optimism is golden and quite becomes you Andy................. take a spoonful three times a day and a double dose at night sir .. Cheers, Neville

          • BoxMyHeart

            Reminds me of a woman I know. Stubborn with a tattoo of honest on her body.

            • Neville


              ................................................. You mean there might be more than just the one of em?
              It's a funny old dangerous world innit .................................
              ..................................................Thanks for dropping in and saying hi
              Cheers, Neville ......................................................................................:)



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