Endeavouring Elucidations

orchidee



Tune: Wiltshire

('Through all the changing scenes of life')

Based partly on a Collect [Formal Prayer]

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Endeavour to keep unity

Of the Spirit, so be

In the bond of peace, family

Of God His people be

 

In sharing love practically

In deed and word freely

So witness to the world we may

Of Christ's salvation day

 

With all lowliness, gentleness

And meekness, Christ profess

With longsuffering, forbearing

Each other in each thing

 

Not pride or selfishness, what I

Want, but to self deny

To know Christ's way, so true life gain

E'en times of suffering, pain

 

Yet we shall in His image grow

And more Christ's likeness show

Help us way of your Spirit go

Follow, where wind does blow

 

If earth-bound, give grace to release

What we hold to, so cease

Shall things of me, not what I will

But your good will fulfil

 

  • Author: orchidee (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 27th, 2020 03:09
  • Comment from author about the poem: A hymn-poem in 8.6.8.6. metre. We may FEEL good, OK, cosy, when we get want WE want. Often it's - do we NEED it or WANT it? People can seem OK if they selfishly have all they want, as in 'It's all right for you; you've had a cosy life!' 'So cease shall things of me'. Not that we have to be ascetics or masochistic though.
  • Category: Spiritual
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Comments3

  • orchidee

    The original hymn was written by a former Poet Laureate.

  • Goldfinch60

    Good one Orchi.

    • orchidee

      Thanks Gold.

    • Neville


      I'm gonna give you top marks for your title alone ...

      • orchidee

        Thanks Neville. I couldn't say the title after a couple of whiskies... Another 'E' to go with Endeavouring. Ya cant beat a bit of Elucidation, can ya? Or El-loosh-e-dayshuns. Hic! Said it.



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