Neville

Innerness

Innerness

 

Where you would have boundaries

there is a burn mark on my skin ….

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Remember this though darling

the world outside is small and tame

When compared to the wilderness

Within …………………………………………

 

 

Comments6

  • Fay Slimm.

    Wildness inside - that holds a truth when boundaries are shattered by boundless passion......... what an invite when all outside feels confined to tame................. brilliant write again Nev.

    • Neville


      thanks Fay .. always appreciated and truly ....

      ............... N x

    • dusk arising

      In my case the world within would be more aptly described as a thicket. Overgrown with the weeds of lost causes seeded by the fallen fruits of past desire.... but enough of me.

      Tell her not to mark her would be boundaries with poured candle wax upon your tortured flesh sir. For your body is a temple, fallen to ruin maybe, but still deserving of respect.

      Oh the games you play with my mind, capable of such perverse yet simple thought. Another intriguing write.

      • Neville



        ................ Honoured I am and truly my friend ... Have a goodly day sir and then some ..

        Neville

      • orchidee

        Could I meet her, or is she all yours? I barge in without asking sometimes, it seems. lol.

        • Neville



          I am not greedy and I neither own or possess anyone .. you should maybe try your luck .. ya never know .................... :)

        • Goldfinch60

          Within ourselves is a vast wilderness and wildness that can take us to such wonderful places in our minds and hearts.

          Andy

          • Neville



            and who can honestly say they never wanted to be an explorer , eh .. thanks a million GF60 sir ...

          • L. B. Mek

            'Where you would have boundaries
            there is a burn mark on my skin'
            Brilliant!

            • Neville



              thank you L.B and so very much ..... it still stings, but only very occasionally now ..................................

            • Romantic Bloom

              Pretty cool write! Wilderness within
              sounds like fun to explore!
              Are your gates open?

              I Think your shades are pretty cool!
              Me thinks you need sun tan lotion

              • Neville



                thank you kindly and true my friend ... one can never have enough sun tan lotion, can one .. pm me and I shall send you my postal address ... x



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