I’m Drowning.
I can’t reach the surface, struggling to swim up for a breath of air.
I’m suffocating.
It feels as though someone is squeezing my lungs, and sitting on my chest.
It’s overwhelming.
A pit in my stomach, and a violent shiver like I’m freezing and can’t get warm.
It’s deafening.
My heart intensely pounding out of my chest, my mind racing in absolute panic.
I’m dying.
the only eligible thought in my head. Is this it? Is this how I end? I can’t help but think that this feeling will never go away.
I’m drowning.
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Author:
Ghost (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 7th, 2020 01:53
- Comment from author about the poem: Written from personal experience and feelings.
- Category: Sad
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Comments2
May your life fill with the lightness of air and you raise to the surface and see the wonder of the world that is there for us all.
Welcome to MPS.
Thank you for this! That’s really sweet
Sex shouldnt feel like that... have you considered a new mattress?
Kdksjdkddjjdjsj I’ll try that
Hey DA - you are having quite the day...Ho Ha Ho (substitute for a smiley which I haven't learnt to do here)
Dave
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