Poetic Dan

Walk the line

If I can never win and others lose much more, than this middle line I walk still unsure! 


Yet from within my core there's a connection that's true, nature has no words! I'm running out too! 


Life is precious and wonderfully emotionally rich but I find we fear the beauty in it! 


Lost in the beliefs of intellectual consumption, we let go of the understanding that's ment to ground us! 


The gift that each soul is! Is for them to find, never can it be possible to force or shelter a mind! 


As we are part of this great kindom, when animals have no need to draw a line! 


It is written in the stars, love never leaves the heart! 


Each lesson got us here

Look no further than who we are

The gut is the reason to never give up 


When you get to watch in awe as time slowly evaporates

Passing down little message knowing its never to late... 





  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 8th, 2020 18:38
  • Comment from author about the poem: Can't sleep and letting out a mixture of emotions in this!! Thanks to the that read and comment, I would normally be highly engaged but this world is becoming very heavy for me and I'm trying to just focus on work plus family... Much peace and respect
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  • Goldfinch60

    "It is written in the stars, love never leaves the heart! " so important in our lives, love can cure all ills in our lives.


    • Poetic Dan

      Our just give us alot to pen! Always deeply appreciated my friend...

    • AwHec8

      I absolutely Love this Poem, Poetic Dan! Yes if we can get past what we see as ugly in our own minds then maybe we can get to the Beauty We All Really Are! Love Don

      • Poetic Dan

        We can only keep trying to undo the unwanted programming!

        Thank you for your time
        Always appreciated
        Much peace and respect

      • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

        Great awesome muse, on love and life and how you muse on different things and feelings in a super way. Kudos for this rich poem.

        Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem here. Thanks.

        • Poetic Dan

          Thank you so much, I will have a quick look but it honestly takes me a long time to read...

          Much peace and respect

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