I stand on a field
Deep in the countryside
And there around me
On this chilled autumn morn
The beauty of the sun filled sky
Fills me with wonder
As the bright blue is bubbled with white
Where the clouds drift slowly by
Filling my body, heart and mind
With the glory of nature
As I wonder what is beyond that sky
The unknown is out there
Just waiting for me to arrive
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 9th, 2020 02:28
- Comment from author about the poem: Just thinking once more.
- Category: Reflection
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Good write Gold.
Erm, a hefty shower of rain is waiting for me, as I look out me window! Doh! Better than nasty fog though.
Thanks Orchi, don\'t worry about the rain skin is waterproof.
Andy
And - how's the thinking going? Will it be dangerous?!
Yes I know, I shouldn't do it.
You told me not to think in 1066, but I didn't listen. Doh!
ah' the great universal wonder .... and so perfectly penned ..............
Thank you Neville, that wonder is there for us all - in time.
Andy
BRIAN HERE - Good Morning Uncle Andy ! Thanks for sharing a great piece ofTrad Jazz by ACKER BILK -master of the melancholy - low register Clarinette ! Called Home 2014 ~ another we shall never hear in Concert again !
Loved the POEM another reminder of *What a Wonderful World* and as you say *There is much much more beyond the Solar System ~ than we have ever dreamed ot thought ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love A & B & Smokey 💛💛💛
Thank you Brian, yes it is a wonderful world out there and is there for all to see.
Andy
BRIAN HERE - Good Morning Uncle Andy ! Thanks for sharing a great piece of Trad Jazz by ACKER BILK -master of the melancholy - low register Clarinette ! Called Home 2014 ~ another we shall never hear in Concert again !
Loved the POEM another reminder of *What a Wonderful World* and as you say *There is much much more beyond the Solar System* ~ than we have ever dreamed ot thought ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love A & B & Smokey 💛💛💛
Hi Andy,
Very nice. I have a similar place.
I call it “the orchard on a hill”
An apple orchard near where I live.
I take my dog for walks there I stop and do that as your poem.
Best Regards
JP
Thank you John, those places are so very special to us.
Andy
There's no rush to take that final journey yet. Plenty of needs for you on this side of the great divide.
No, certainly no rush d a, so much more to see, admire and listen too.
Andy
Wow awesome muse as you picture the imagery superbly and wonder about what's beyond this earthly sky. I like how you depicted the glory of nature. Kudos!!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem here. Thanks.
Thank you so much for your kind words szk, much appreciated.
Andy
Your spiritual thoughts when walking make my day when on reading I almost am out there joining you as sky melts with landscape and future awaits.......... thank you dear Andy for another grand write.
Thank you Fay, you can join me any time viewing Nature's bounty.
Andy
A wonderful, mystical write Andy.
Thank you.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during lockdown.
FineB
Thank you FB, that mystery is there for us all to ponder.
Andy
I too, have at times looked up and wondered what may be looking back down at little old us - we conqueror's supreme, of all that we see, with our legacies of sandhill empires,
so I can relate with those wonderings captured within your words, what truly awaits at that final arrival gate...
a though provoking write!
Thank you LB, yes we must all wonder at some time what is really out there.
Andy
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