The Unknown Is Out There.

Goldfinch60



I stand on a field

Deep in the countryside

And there around me

On this chilled autumn morn

The beauty of the sun filled sky

Fills me with wonder

As the bright blue is bubbled with white

Where the clouds drift slowly by

Filling my body, heart and mind

With the glory of nature

As I wonder what is beyond that sky

The unknown is out there

Just waiting for me to arrive

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 9th, 2020 02:28
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just thinking once more.
  • Category: Reflection
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  • orchidee

    Good write Gold.
    Erm, a hefty shower of rain is waiting for me, as I look out me window! Doh! Better than nasty fog though.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks Orchi, don\'t worry about the rain skin is waterproof.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      And - how's the thinking going? Will it be dangerous?!

      • Goldfinch60

        Yes I know, I shouldn't do it.

        • orchidee

          You told me not to think in 1066, but I didn't listen. Doh!

        • Neville



          ah' the great universal wonder .... and so perfectly penned ..............

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Neville, that wonder is there for us all - in time.

            Andy

          • ANGELA & BRIAN

            BRIAN HERE - Good Morning Uncle Andy ! Thanks for sharing a great piece ofTrad Jazz by ACKER BILK -master of the melancholy - low register Clarinette ! Called Home 2014 ~ another we shall never hear in Concert again !
            Loved the POEM another reminder of *What a Wonderful World* and as you say *There is much much more beyond the Solar System ~ than we have ever dreamed ot thought ~ AMEN

            Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
            Love A & B & Smokey πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Brian, yes it is a wonderful world out there and is there for all to see.

              Andy

            • ANGELA & BRIAN

              BRIAN HERE - Good Morning Uncle Andy ! Thanks for sharing a great piece of Trad Jazz by ACKER BILK -master of the melancholy - low register Clarinette ! Called Home 2014 ~ another we shall never hear in Concert again !
              Loved the POEM another reminder of *What a Wonderful World* and as you say *There is much much more beyond the Solar System* ~ than we have ever dreamed ot thought ~ AMEN

              Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
              Love A & B & Smokey πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

            • John Prophet

              Hi Andy,

              Very nice. I have a similar place.
              I call it β€œthe orchard on a hill”
              An apple orchard near where I live.
              I take my dog for walks there I stop and do that as your poem.

              Best Regards
              JP

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you John, those places are so very special to us.

                Andy

              • dusk arising

                There's no rush to take that final journey yet. Plenty of needs for you on this side of the great divide.

                • Goldfinch60

                  No, certainly no rush d a, so much more to see, admire and listen too.

                  Andy

                • 🐀s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                  Wow awesome muse as you picture the imagery superbly and wonder about what's beyond this earthly sky. I like how you depicted the glory of nature. Kudos!!

                  Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem here. Thanks.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you so much for your kind words szk, much appreciated.

                    Andy

                  • Fay Slimm.

                    Your spiritual thoughts when walking make my day when on reading I almost am out there joining you as sky melts with landscape and future awaits.......... thank you dear Andy for another grand write.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you Fay, you can join me any time viewing Nature's bounty.

                      Andy

                    • FineB

                      A wonderful, mystical write Andy.

                      Thank you.

                      Keep writing ✍ and safe during lockdown.
                      FineB

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Thank you FB, that mystery is there for us all to ponder.

                        Andy

                      • L. B. Mek

                        I too, have at times looked up and wondered what may be looking back down at little old us - we conqueror's supreme, of all that we see, with our legacies of sandhill empires,
                        so I can relate with those wonderings captured within your words, what truly awaits at that final arrival gate...
                        a though provoking write!

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Thank you LB, yes we must all wonder at some time what is really out there.

                          Andy



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