Somewhere Between Trees
Somewhere
En route between
Points A and B
...
Our path was still
golden and seemingly
littered with sovereigns
...
Though some
might just as well
have been leaves …
...
Somewhere
en route just a few
steps between trees …
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Author:
Neville (
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Good write Neville.
... Thanks for that Orchidee ... Neville
The golden and treasured moments of love seep through every short line of this tender write......... another wee gem of a remembered time.......... maybe............. x
...................................... maybe is write .. bless you and true ........... x
The golden years. For some there may just golden days but gold is gold and never loses it's value as a treasure.
To look back on such wealth..... sigh!
... I am with you DA .. I think that is the reason I write .. as a sort of reference and aide memoire for my own autumn and golden years ........................................ yep, deep sigh & a hefty thank you sir 🙂
Trees, begin to blossom in Springtime, flourish in Summer, shed their adornments in Autumn, and bear the weight of snow in Winter. A life lived "between trees" can follow this same path of development.
Your poem reads like a fallen leaf, something shed to prepare for the colder season. There is a lot of symbolism in trees and leaves, and now, in the pathways beneath them. I sensed a lot of emotion in this poem. as though of a life changing. Life's " Point A and B" which we all follow often is strewn with too many "leaves." - Phil A
I can not tell you how much I appreciate your visits my friend ... you seem to read me so well & invariably leave a reasoned comment that I find encouraging... thank you and truly....
Neville 👍😎🍷cheers
Our paths of life can compare with the paths of nature and that is why I compare my golden moments with the wonder of Autumn, the most golden time of the year.
Andy
snap............................ me too my friend .. great minds eh' thank you for making my morning shine ..
all good things,
... Neville
intriguing concept and stylistically creative in execution,
pondering those what-if's we've all yearned to answer at one point or another,
an innovative meditation, on a timeless topic
thanking you kindly and then some has almost become a reflex .. as has the smile you pin on each reviewed day ... many sincere thank you's LB ..
a most appreciative,
Neville
Beautiful write, neville!
...How very bloomin kind stranger .. it is good to see you back my friend .. I do hope you and all your loved ones are safe and well ...
... Neville
Awe every road has its treasure
Every memory a golden nugget
May both be everlasting,
thank you so much PB ... and please excuse my late response .. I have been rather preoccupied the last few days or so... take care and stay safe my friend ..
You’re welcome and you too ! 🎶🎶🎶
- the fallen leaves, remind me of my life cycle, but at peace I am -----
Thank you for this journey
Hello my friend, many thanks indeed for checking in and checking out this little scribble .. as always, much appreciated and true...
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