Reflections on ecstasy

RDS






Spirit, dancing with your body
my heart sings of your memory
a chasm filled to overflowing.
Rolling in love tumbling without falling, landing and taking off again.
Tender hands touching skin.
Soothing, holding, healing and enchanting in a single silken stroke.
A sense of belonging leads to curious abandon.
Feeling infinite bliss swell in every kiss.
Rising passions like an endless wave of movement flowing to the shore on which it will be broken.
An explosion of rainbow colours dripping sunshine, cascading and subsiding.
Contentment that feels complete.
No need of another heartbeat.

  • Author: RDS (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 20th, 2020 13:05
  • Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this this morning to my sweetheart who is away for a few days.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 48
  • User favorite of this poem: Poetic Dan.
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Comments7

  • Fay Slimm.

    An explosion of glorious togetherness as belonging and its tender display swells both hearts........ a beautiful read and thank you for sharing love's feelings. -

    • RDS

      Thank you! Luckily for me she loves poetry and I attempt to put her charms in verse. We both enjoy the mind and psyche so I wrote this (breaching the 1 poem a day rule!)

      EMMA
      Wow, you can be like treasure found in every thought
      Pleasure oscillating in every corner and region of my brain
      A sensuous presence in every neuron
      Ghostly desires in each dendrite connection
      You're a hit of adrenalin and seratonin
      Neurotransmitting
      The blissful clouds floating around.
      Passions pulsing in the moment and rhythms across time
      You're one of a kind

    • Goldfinch60

      Wonderful words, your love is so strong and will be with you forever.

      Welcome to MPS.

      • RDS

        Thank you for those kind words and sentiments Goldfinch. I think it is in a poets power to love fiercely and fearlessly, however many times our hearts are broken. So I write these tokens of affection. Keep up the good work too!

      • orchidee

        Good write RDS.

        • RDS

          Thanks orchidee! I'm looking forward to reading more from you all here.

        • ANGELA & BRIAN

          BRIAN HERE (Angela & I have been married for eight months !) Good Morning RDS welcome to MPS ! It is a proactive site and operates by Reading & Sharing each others Poetry ! Please check our site ~ Thanks.
          *When you are in LOVE ~ the whole World sings a MELODY !* which for Angela & I is very very true. Thanks for both of you first Poems ~ they both *Rang a Bell* with US ~ AMEN

          Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
          Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛

          • RDS

            Thanks for your hearty comments and the welcome. I'm enjoying the site and readings I've made so far. Particularly the one poem rule, which incites more creative comments to keep creativity flowing.

          • L. B. Mek

            such emotive imagery utilised deftly, entwined within a seamlessly natural flow, a wonderful dedication

            • Poetic Dan

              Reply is under incase you missed it but I'll echo your vibration 😉

              • L. B. Mek

                thank you, very kind

              • RDS

                You have left me a rich impression thank you and you have it exactly LB, a dedication. If the subject is exquisite regard and fascination are guaranteed.

              • Poetic Dan

                Remind me perfectly of the experience on dmt and then that special time of year when the shrooms come and help with mother nature recipe!!

                My top 10 of all time..
                Thanks for taking me back on a ride!!

                • RDS

                  Nice, probably got a residual trace of dmt myself from a well-used youth. All the veils removed it looked good in colours reality can't match. The vividness is what I'm trying to add.
                  Stay creative!
                  J



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