I shiver against the cold night
But you are here to keep me warm
Losing myself in your retreat
Love itself is taking form
Quietly yelling out your name
Taking months out of my years,
Pleasure I take in your embrace
Fighting back these happy tears
I take you until
all innocence is lost
I needed to need you
No matter the cost
Our sins are apparent
on the sheets in a heap
'You must go now'
I mutter and weep..
- Author: Christina (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: November 21st, 2020 18:13
- Category: Fantasy
- Views: 67
Comments8
Strikes me as a real viceral interpretation of libido and ego struggling within the spirit, a potent piece of work thank you Christina.
I appreciate the kind review, thanks RDS!!!---Christina
He may have to go now Christina but he will be back.
Andy
LOL thanks Andy!
I have no doubt at all he is thoroughly exhausted .. but contentedly so and just cant wait to come back for some more .. aptly titled and gaggingly good Christina ...
Thank you Neville....
My sheets were in a heap too. That's cos I had a nightmare and couldn't settle!
Erm, I not quite got the theme of the poem! Don't tell me - I will swoon. Glad some ones are having fun anyway! lol.
Thanks Orchidee!!
Wow - how alive you make the scene of coupling pleasure my friend - A perfectly poemed and potent description of the well chosen title - - such a compelling read dear Christina.
Thanks so much Fay!
ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharing a LOVE FANTASY ! All LADIES love to fantcise ! Sometimes about a Lost Love - oten about our Current Love and even abut a Future Love. But like You & J - NOTHING can come between - Past - Present or Future - the intensity and faithfulness of the *Eternal Love* I have for Brian - NOW & FOREVER - AMEN
Benediciones a Tu y Tu Familla Preciosa
Con Amor A & B & El Gato Ahumido 💛💛💛
Thanks Angela, much appreciated!
good read
Thank you much appreciated!
What you fantasize, I wish to experience
Thanks
Thanks for reading my poem!
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