Those Who Would Love Light

Neville

Those Who Would Love Light

 

She is more than a

tumble of words

is my lady ..

Each one of them

flowing or golden

like gems …………

A poem

just waiting to

happen …………..

Caught in a spiral

suspended in rays

then strained slowly

Through stained glass

and

held aloft over alters

Dancing

with dust motes

in an arc before falling

Like light

refracted and traced

upon a glorious chapter

Prismed

and flawless

Adored by both

Blind men and miners

She is

more than a poem

Penned perfect

and patiently poised

just waiting …

To be exposed

to be seen

to be loved and be read

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 24th, 2020 01:30
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek, Fay Slimm., Dove
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  • Goldfinch60

    May the reading of her be love forever.

    Andy

    • Neville



      ....................................... Golden words indeed & true .. thank you Andy ....
      ....... Neville

    • orchidee

      Good write Neville.
      I'm a disaster waiting to happen - well, If I say 'I'm about to sing', that is! lol.

      • Neville



        ........................... just becuz ya small n furry, it doesn't mean you need to put ya self down .. I'm sure there are a lot of us who would be more than happy to do that for ya ... kiddin of course, maybe 🙂

        • orchidee

          But my terrible singing is legendary. It's know on here, though poets wish they didn't know (or hear) it! lol.

        • dusk arising

          The bringing together of love's desire and fantasy with the tangible presence of love realised sund in your fine words today.

          • Neville



            ............................ just as there are sights that please the eye .. he loves the sound of dusk arising ..
            ... thank you kindly & true DA..

          • L. B. Mek

            well Sir, this here be testimony to resulting fruition of poetry dipped in elegance of mesmeric transcendence, when we witness the marriage of talent with its inspiringly majestic muse...
            'Dancing
            with dust motes
            in an arc before falling
            Like light
            refracted and traced
            upon a glorious chapter
            Prismed
            and flawless'
            how wondrously you decipher the rainbow gift's of life, from the dreary of reality,
            a great write my friend!

            • Neville



              ............................ Here's sending a bloomin big BLESS YOU and TRUE my friend ..

            • Fay Slimm.

              This bouquet of exquisite medley carries the scent of true poetic talent which catches my breath and warms my heart-felt confession that this must be one your best mon ami - a real and true favourite and already heading my list to read yet again................x

              • Neville



                You have absolutely no idea just how much I appreciate your ongoing support dear friend n poet ... suffice to say, far more than just considerably .................. x

              • RDS

                It's in the eye and the ear what a beautiful reminder that love is always here. Even in dust and shifting beams of sunlight. Thanks for a lovely read Neville.

                • Neville



                  ....................................................... thanking you kindly my friend, much appreciated RDS,
                  ... Neville

                • Christina8

                  A stunning ode to your lady.....thanks for another wonderful poem, n! x

                  • Neville



                    ... thank you Christina tis so good to have you back .. all good things, Neville x

                  • Dove

                    Oh love light be true, Tis heaven to inspire such beauty, Tis glory to have a Poet , love you
                    and be inspired to create such great poetry!

                    I’ll just live in the light beams refracted from your sweet poetry !

                    • Neville



                      ..... I will take that as a yes then ... and even if it's not, I shall jolly well make believe and pretend .... Thank you kindly & true RB ..

                      Neville



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