Those Who Would Love Light
She is more than a
tumble of words
is my lady ..
…
Each one of them
flowing or golden
like gems …………
…
A poem
just waiting to
happen …………..
…
Caught in a spiral
suspended in rays
then strained slowly
…
Through stained glass
and
held aloft over alters
…
Dancing
with dust motes
in an arc before falling
…
Like light
refracted and traced
upon a glorious chapter
…
Prismed
and flawless
Adored by both
…
Blind men and miners
She is
more than a poem
…
Penned perfect
and patiently poised
just waiting …
…
To be exposed
to be seen
to be loved and be read
…
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Neville (
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May the reading of her be love forever.
Andy
....................................... Golden words indeed & true .. thank you Andy ....
....... Neville
Good write Neville.
I'm a disaster waiting to happen - well, If I say 'I'm about to sing', that is! lol.
........................... just becuz ya small n furry, it doesn't mean you need to put ya self down .. I'm sure there are a lot of us who would be more than happy to do that for ya ... kiddin of course, maybe 🙂
But my terrible singing is legendary. It's know on here, though poets wish they didn't know (or hear) it! lol.
The bringing together of love's desire and fantasy with the tangible presence of love realised sund in your fine words today.
............................ just as there are sights that please the eye .. he loves the sound of dusk arising ..
... thank you kindly & true DA..
well Sir, this here be testimony to resulting fruition of poetry dipped in elegance of mesmeric transcendence, when we witness the marriage of talent with its inspiringly majestic muse...
'Dancing
with dust motes
in an arc before falling
Like light
refracted and traced
upon a glorious chapter
Prismed
and flawless'
how wondrously you decipher the rainbow gift's of life, from the dreary of reality,
a great write my friend!
............................ Here's sending a bloomin big BLESS YOU and TRUE my friend ..
This bouquet of exquisite medley carries the scent of true poetic talent which catches my breath and warms my heart-felt confession that this must be one your best mon ami - a real and true favourite and already heading my list to read yet again................x
You have absolutely no idea just how much I appreciate your ongoing support dear friend n poet ... suffice to say, far more than just considerably .................. x
It's in the eye and the ear what a beautiful reminder that love is always here. Even in dust and shifting beams of sunlight. Thanks for a lovely read Neville.
....................................................... thanking you kindly my friend, much appreciated RDS,
... Neville
A stunning ode to your lady.....thanks for another wonderful poem, n! x
... thank you Christina tis so good to have you back .. all good things, Neville x
Oh love light be true, Tis heaven to inspire such beauty, Tis glory to have a Poet , love you
and be inspired to create such great poetry!
I’ll just live in the light beams refracted from your sweet poetry !
..... I will take that as a yes then ... and even if it's not, I shall jolly well make believe and pretend .... Thank you kindly & true RB ..
Neville
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