I rhyme better than I can act, it doesn't mean it's all rabbit in a hat!
I go so deep inside my mind, others look like they're out of time!
A lie can't be a lie, if you mean it at the time! Yes I stoll that and the next line
As some see a trap, others see free cheese and a challenge
I try to be water my friend, not to be moved like a mountain
As nothing I say can be original, the order and placement is the only significance
For there is no wisdom and no hidden knowledge
Its all but a stage, yet I can't find my porridge!
Unable to follow the crumbs back out of the forest
At least the sun & the moon still get acknowledged
Until they fall from the sky, my thoughts will be super sonic
Looking for the moment, to be proud of what I've accomplished
This responsibility is all mine and no one else
Still healing the past to not pass on this practice
When the only treasure to hold, is a heart that's not fractured
I can only apologise and ask for forgiveness, in a world full of memories
To give more light than dark, knowing both are apart of me
Hopefully soon this will resonate with my anatomy
Maybe then I'll remember what it's like to have a gut in harmony
Like winning the lottery for now I keep writing, until I embrace the life that's inside and out of me
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Dam this 4 hours sleep pattern, up from 1am any of now 4am...Still feeling relieved, as there is now like the 3am spirit to guide thoses thoughts... Never forget how powerful they or you are!! Always appreciate your time & rhyme
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There's a lot of wise words in your post today.
Those headlines interest me though. Cos Mr Dusk Arising can write far wiser that he is able to live day to day. But that's just a human failing - a part of us all.
Just the same as you Dan, I fight the inner struggle that is a torture of my early experiences of life. My sense of what is right and noble is my weapon backed up by a little wisdom earned from experience.
Keep up that good fight... the alternatives are crap.
I read your words as I walk around the pond, hearing ducks laugh with us both...
You never fail to impress me and I hope you enjoy the morning post and video with yours and uneducated OAP spirits in mind
Keep writing Dan your words are bringing you into a much better world, a world that is there for us all, let us live in that better world and go forward in harmony.
Andy
great write,
we all tend to prance on our keyboard of high horses but fall short when it's time to walk reality's chequered boards,
still on-n-on we sing to give voice to that part within, yearning to be the best we can achieve
I definitely back up every word not that we should find the need but some need to see me flying down the street with the dogs, or jumping on through my car window!
The magic is all, we are all prof but so is failing and shadows that you are spot on, many are to afraid to reveal yet once you let go.... Only the individual knows the truth of the power we yield!
Always appreciate your time, I get how precious it is!
Much peace and respect, thanks for joining my journey
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