summer No 17

dusk arising





There was
promise
in the air
that summer.

Piling into
Jimmy's truck
and hit the
riverside.

Drinking
sweet cider.
Messing round
till gone sunset.


With a stolen kiss
.            i watched a dream unfold in moonlit eyes.

Eyes
which faded
with the new
day's light.

Such days
were cheap
and plenty
then.

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 28th, 2020 00:24
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  • Doggerel Dave

    Definitely "Those Lazy-Hazy-Crazy Days of Summer"
    Ah - memories...

    Remembering..
    Dave

  • Neville


    When I close my eyes, these words ring golden in my head and gently so..

    Thank you for a moments respite my friend .................

    Neville

  • Goldfinch60

    Indeed back then, mine was a pint of bitter though, not cider.

    Andy

  • orchidee

    A fine write dusk. When is the Summer No. 18?!

  • Fay Slimm.

    Ah - -- as the song said - -"Those were the days my friend - We thought they would never end " --- thanks for this nostalgic write that gets to the heart and makes for sighs.......

  • L. B. Mek

    'With a stolen kiss
    . i watched a dream unfold in moonlit eyes.'
    beautiful imagery, a great read

  • Poetic Dan

    Happy music is playing and quickly read one rhyme..... Roll on the good times!!

    Cheers buddy

    • Poetic Dan

      Just listened to yours and I think I use that once I get out the jungle.... Whoop whoop!

    • ANGELA & BRIAN

      BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evenin* Dusk ~ Thanks for VIDEO ~ very kool !
      Loved the scenario in the Poem ~ I fear (for a variety of social & other reasons) those Lazy - Hazy - Crazy days you describe will never again retrun to the UK ~ Life gets serious don* it !

      Thanks for remindin* & sharin*
      Love - Peace & Joy to You & Yours
      Angela - Brian & Smokey ! ! !

    • Suresh

      ...do I dare reminisce......

      Thanks



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