The way to your heart

Sadie

Tracing a line

As the blue hills

Pass by in a flash

Of orange sky

And the clouds open up

To the sea below

Shimmering, vast

Dotted with sails

Speeding toward you

As we slowly dance

Circle each other

Touching hands

Brushing cheeks

Beams of light

Across the bridges

Tracing a line

Through pale forests

Where frozen tracks

Make light-winged manoeuvres

And the girl in the reflection

Catches my eyes

Sees something of her future

As the blue hills

Pass by in a flash

Of orange sky

And my heart beats

At your tempo.

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ANGELA & BRIAN November 28th, 2020 17:34
ANGELA here - Good Evening SADIE welcome to MPS ! It is proactive site and it operates by reading & commenting on each others Poems - please visit our Site - Thanks.
Love the Shape & Subject - LOVE - of your elegant Poem. Your Poem is an apt description of the senses & sensations we experience when we fall in Love & TWO hearts to beat as ONE !

Thanks for sharing & caring
Love Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Angela Brian & Sokey Cat ! ! !
Goldfinch60 November 29th, 2020 01:51
Beautiful loving poem, may your hearts beat together forever.

Welcome to MPS.
RDS November 29th, 2020 06:51
A nice beat in the heart of this poem. Wistful and tentative like a shy hunger good manners can never sate however noble the desire is.
J

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