Unbeelievable!
Humble and Blondebee’s first date didn’t go with a bang.
He took her to the Kinema to see ‘Killer Bee’, aw man!
I can’t wait to see this film, it looks so cool!
It’s about an assassin who targets The Queen; it rules!
The two of them watched and Humble was amazed;
Blondebee unfortunately didn’t feel the same,
And as they were eating at the Nectar Queen,
Blondebee tore into the film,
And Humble couldn’t beelieve what he was hearing.
Surely you liked it? I loved it so much!
Sorry, I guess it’s a boy’s film, where is the love?
Love? It’s an action movie and Stingy did rescue the girl bee.
Oh, but wasn’t it long-winded and boring? Couldn’t you see?
I would have preferred a romantic comedy.
Humble thought ‘I’m in one…it’s called reality.’
You must have loved the car chases and flying stinger’s flying?
It wasn’t realistic. Well of course not, it’s a film…Jeez, I’m dying…
And then she asked what they were going to do tomorrow.
After tonight? That’s a hard act to follow.
I thought we would see the comedian That Bee.
Oh, he’s not that funny, if you ask me.
Just give it a try.
I gave the movie a try. When are we going to do something I like?
The day after tomorrow, we can do what you want.
Ok, I guess we’ll see That Bee then, won’t that bee fun!
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- Author: Aa Harvey ( Offline)
- Published: November 29th, 2020 02:28
- Comment from author about the poem: This is a story I am writing...
- Category: Short story
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Comments1
Good write Aa. I've been dipping into snippets of this story as it's been going on.
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