Notice of absence from L. B. Mek
'fare ye well' kind friends
'fare ye well' kind friends
Do you know me?
as footprints, on morning dew
Will you, remember me?
only your own choices, curate history’s pages
How do I learn, to choose wisely?
by treading pebbles - that resonate, with your pulse rate
© L. B. Mek
March 2020
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An incredible imagery-filled poem on what love means as time passes and with a last line that is so heart-stirringly beautiful Mek this has to go into my list of favourites.
wow, that's just - well: Awesome!
in the wise words of Mr Gump: 'that's, all I gota say about thaaaat' lol
(thank you, sincerely)
Good write LB.
Weaving in Assistant Priests eloquently - Curates, I mean! (Do shut up Orchi. lol).
now, now you clever so and so, no i never: me, i'm all innocent and friendly, i don't do stealthy commentary...
i'm all brunt and shoddy with me thinking's, I leave the obsidian scalpel wordplay, to those Degree equipped - with self-belief,
i just scribble: instinctively and hope kind eyes, interpret with empathy: these feeble effort's, I share gift wrapped with naivety... lmao (no idea how you kind folks at MPS tolerate me)
what a pair of knuckle heads we make, eh Orchi
Thanks LB lol. Aww, not feeble. Well, you didn't use a capital 'C' for curates, or I would be correct in thinking you was on about priests! lol
*Looks up *'obsidian*. Now off on a trail of black rock or summat!
There's nuttier than us on here, I expect, but 'no names, no pack drill'.
Three good questions upon which to wisely ponder and one resounding answer. Though many a pebble may have known my footfall.
always a highlight when i'm gifted one of your insightful comments on a write, as always thanks for taking the time, much appreciated my friend
Nicely done. Read it several times get something different each time.
yeah, it's one of those write's that's very open to interpretation I think
thanks for the supportive comment
Super words Mek, as you know you learn through the wisdom of experience.
Andy
indeed, thanks for the support Andy
Your words surely resonated with me, as I must learn to thread those pebbles
let me know the trick when you do, lol
thanks for taking the time to support and comment
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