Stay safe this Christmas
enjoy the drinks and food
And hope the New Year
will be nothing but all good:
turn can'ts into cans
and your dreams to plans
travel and enjoy
sunshine and real tans,
meet people live again
hug them and kiss
our dear friends and family
who now we only miss.
Stay strong this Christmas
do things that make you happy
laugh a lot and be positive
that's the best therapy.
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Author:
Hugi (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Received our first Christmas card from our neighbour today morning, so I decided to write my card for her today. I sat for hours not knowing what to write.. “enjoy your Christmas holidays with your family and loved ones”? That just didn’t sound right. Not this year anyway..
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Comments5
Good write A.
Thanks 🙂
ANGELA here ~ Good Evening HUGI - welcome to MPS it is a proactive site in which we read and comment on each others Poems ! Please visit our site - Thanks A & B !
Thank you for your first Poem - Excellent ! Four balanced Quatrains with a consistent Rhythm & Rhyme pattern ! MORE PLEASE ! One minor point at the end of Line 5 Gramatically & Rhymewise *can* should be *cans* - OK.
I love the subject of the Poem and the fact that it was for a Friend ! It strikes a very positive note in a *COVID stressed* Christmas ~ Thanks
Blessings & Joy & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
Thank you so much Angela and Brian - much appreciated 🙂
Laughter is the best medicine. Great poem.
Thank you Melissa 🙂
Wonderful positive write Alzbeta, may your words come true in all our lives, I am sure that they will.
Welcome to MPS.
Thank you so much for your kind words, I’m really pleased I found MPS 🙂
reads wonderfully wholesome, but has me wondering if I've missed something since it's age restricted?
hope you have a safe and relaxing final few weeks to what's been a testing 2020
Thank you so much 🙂
And I’m sorry - only found MPS yesterday, need to revisit and familiarise with the site.
So no, you have not missed anything age restricted! Thank you for letting me know though.
Take care 🙂
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