The Moon's Call.

Goldfinch60



Oh what a beautiful Morning,

I was there walking with My River

And there before me in this dawn light

Shone the full moon.

I walked towards it

Glorying in its beauty and wonder.

It shined on me leading me into my future

And I rose towards it,

Being pulled by this glorious sight.

One day I will reach it

And from there take off,

Take off into eternity with my lover.

We will tour the infinite Universe

With our love propelling us once more,

Into the glory of our life together.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 12th, 2020 02:08
  • Comment from author about the poem: The full moon was shining in dawns early light as I was walking with My River.
  • Category: Love
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  • orchidee

    A fine write gold.
    Now it's started me off singing - that first line. Bit old, dates from 1943. Oklahoma film (1955).
    We wouldn't know the newer film (apx 2011) being very old!.

    • Goldfinch60

      If you are not doing anything this afternoon have a look at this. Andy

      https://youtu.be/6NpknzTa3ck

    • Doggerel Dave

      Thanks, as usual for Chet and the Proms, Andy.
      Dave
      Ps: and the poem, I spose.

      • Goldfinch60

        My pleasure Dave, it is Chet's birthday on 23rd December, he was born in 1929 and is my favourite jazz trumpeter.

        Andy

      • dusk arising

        Great to hear Chet really bop. This is 1954 and he still had his teeth.I have become so accustomed to his tone without teeth that hearing young Chet again is a revelation. Such a fluid player. That sounds like an alto clarinet on there too. Much nicer playing than Eric Dolphy who seemed to choose it as his number one weapon. I'm going to have to explore this LP.

        Well what can i say about the moon in your poetry. The moon is a fine lady and despite many a dalliance with her, by me and many other suitors, she retains her virtue.

        • Goldfinch60

          It surely is d a, he was a marvellous player even without his teeth. I too need to explore that session.

          Thank you d a, yes that virtue is always there.

          Andy

        • Dove

          Thanks for an uplifting poem! Beautiful

          • Goldfinch60

            My absolute pleasure RB.

            Andy

          • FredPeyer

            And you WILL tour the Universe with your loved one, and who knows, we might even meet!

            • Goldfinch60

              Of course I will, when we do meet mine is a Rioja please.

              Andy

            • Jerry Reynolds

              Very enjoyable.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Jerry, most kind.

                Andy

              • Poetic Dan

                I do not wish for that next stage but when I comes I'll drift down your river my friend! I'm sure of it!
                Fantastic flow as every!

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thanks Dan, it will be a long time yet.

                  Andy



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