you are like a lotus
blooming only from the
darkest and thickest
mud.
eesome to the eye instinctively.
yet not one soul has taken the time
to understand
your metanoia.
for most, it is difficult to perceive
how something so
precious, so delicate,
can be oh, so orphic.
for most, it is hard to perceive
how one single human being
can lead someone else
into such a profound, immense
jungle of forelsket.
you are like a lotus.
constantly rising up
through the mud
into the lives of people
who need to see, and feel
your beauty
the most.
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Author:
shyla green (Pseudonym) (
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welcome to MPS shyla!
Very well written. Had to look up the meaning of some of the words you used. Well done!
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Evening SHYLA thanks for your first POEM. You will find MPS is a proactive in which we read & comment on each others Poems. Thanks for your first poem an elegant concept and I love some of the *lesser known* words you use. This adds to the quality of the Poem !
In this life we all meet people who shine like Lotus Blossom in a sea of mud ! Yes they are all *Pleasing to the eye* people who themselves have had *A change of Heart* & follow the teachings of Orpheus ! Such People draw us wittingly (or unwittingly) into the *Beginnings of Love* ! My exerience of Brian (who I married in March) was like this ! WE met at a rather low key Dance & Social - at the Hospital where I work and (compared with the other Men) He did shine like a Lotus Blossom ~ AMEN ! Please visit out site ~ Thanks
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian ! !
Good words shyla.
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