How quickly we forget the mission of our own first steps
The balance needed to form a milestone event of the norm
Before you know it this all becomes second nature
Yet once those ambitions were the greatest adventure
Fortunate to be in a time this is so easily captured
For us to look back or just celebrate lifes art in making
The wobbles on the journey of love are all the paints needed
To keep up a pure soulful edition on this universal canvas
Greatful to her first few steps, in the poerty of life
To be my muse & inspiration, keeping the write from dark to light
This little Maarii Iris, is on her way to be a full dragonfly
Blessed to have this gift on lifes mystical magical ride
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This happened Friday and I must say I was so chuffed for she had taken one or two in the week but did a first full strut to me!! It was an awesome moment and one I hope to not forget but if I do, then I'll slap myself with all I've written here! Or look down at those stripes I have earned...honestly so grateful to have all I do around me, thank you for joining me on my journey and soulful thoughts! I never fail to read but don't always have the time to respond! Always appreciated with much peace and respect, keep up the write as one poet always said!
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A lovely clip and write Dan.
Thank you kindly good sir! Have a wonderful day..
Great pics, beautiful video, and the writing ain't bad either!
I don't remember my kids first steps, but I do remember how excited I was by this first show of independence.
Yeah I do ramble on but her pic says it all! Thoses moments of independence keep us forever on our toes, no matter the age they get too!
Glad to see you still popping in!
beautiful
Appreciated, always!
Wonderful video Dan, those first steps are so important and you have captured them bring joy to all of us.
May you new dragonfly bring you the beauty and love as she flies through the wonder of her life that is ahead of her.
Andy
Always appreciated my friend friend, she'll be running into next year for sure!
A lovely time to remember Dan. There will be many more. Such pleasures they bring forth.
You words today are more than about what young Maarii Iris has achieved, for there are great big steps you have too achieved and it seems your are learning to walk tall and look the world right in the eye with love shining out of your eyes.
Respect.
You are right I definitely drifted from my first thoughts but think they came back in the end! Once I confirmed that inner lesson I hope I have fully learnt! To look all in the eye with no hate as my head has been tall and unable to look away!
Thank you buddy and have a fantastic start to the week!!
'then I'll slap myself with all I've written here'
that Sir, is Poetry (in all its forms) distilled to its very nucleus: purpose, for existence...
Amen! oh gifted Poet, what a beautiful dedication you've penned to one of life's most wholesome of wonder's, may the love you imbued in your song keep her safe and never too far: from her next smile, thank you for sharing!
Ha ha! Thank you for picking up that vibration my friend... Hopefully won't need that slap!
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