The Loss of Tenderness

FredPeyer

killed by neglect

thrown out like

dirty bath water

 

rose petals floating

away on the wind

painted snowflakes

 

curly lingering smoke

from extinguished fire

smoldering ash

 

forgotten love songs

distant memories

quietly abandoned

 

behind closed curtains

faded voices die

utter silence

 

desolate mind

vacant space

shattered heart

  • Author: Alfred Peyer (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 13th, 2020 12:55
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    Good write on that theme Fred.

    • FredPeyer

      Thanks so much orchie!!!

    • John Prophet

      Hope this isn’t self biographical
      Nice write!

      • FredPeyer

        Mahalo John! No, just my over-active imagination!

      • Goldfinch60

        That life is what it may have been but you and I have lived our 72 years and feel so grateful to be here with a good life in front of us Fred.

        Andy

        • FredPeyer

          Mahalo Andy,
          You are so right. I just tried to imagine how I would feel if tenderness would be absent.

        • dusk arising

          Painful words. The sort of words one feels when something, which could have been quite beautiful, has come to a sad end for one. These are fitting words for endings for in feeling them one has to accept the word 'over'. And move along to what may lye ahead.

          • FredPeyer

            Thanks da, you hit the nail on the head. We always need to look forward, no matter what happened in the past.

          • L. B. Mek

            elegant use of repurposed poetry form to accentuate the fragmented nature within emotional progression,
            even if just to find that initial foothold within realisation, it's a long journey of day-to-day: while you're living it...
            good write

            • FredPeyer

              Mahalo L.B., for reading and your very poignant comment. It is very much appreciated!

            • Dove

              Well penned lament of loss “ rose petals floating away in the wind” inspires me! Thanks for sharing

              • FredPeyer

                Thanks RB, glad you liked it.



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