Mastication

Neville

Mastication

 

The first time she wore it

His shirt that is, it seemed

To swallow her whole …..

 

But the rest of her though

He slowly and he surely

Masticated and savoured ….

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 16th, 2020 09:23
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Jerry Reynolds

    So was she when she put on that shirt. Good write.

    • Neville



      ....................................... thank you ever so much and kindly sir ... much appreciated .. Neville

    • orchidee

      Now I must meet this fine gal! lol.

      • Neville



        No problem ......................................................................................................................................She lives at number 🙂

        • orchidee

          Aww, your keyboard play up at that vital moment? I may never know where she lives. lol.

        • dusk arising

          BIG smile here. I like that very much. A beautiful woman is like an exquisitely prepared meal. She must be served well and time taken so that all flavours of her femininity may be savoured.

          • Neville



            Big smile here too DA .. thank you my friend .. Your comment reads like the perfect recipe on a cold dark winters eve.................. well any time really .... N

          • FredPeyer

            Well put, Neville, and dusk arising said it all.

            • Neville



              Thank you most kindly Fred .... Much appreciated my friend ......................................................................Neville

            • jarcher54

              Oh, MASTICATED... my bad

              • Neville



                ................. I'll let you chew that one over for a while but in the meantime, thanks for stopping by 🙂

              • Goldfinch60

                As da has said those flavours must be savoured over time.

                Andy

                • Neville



                  .................................................... He is indeed a wise old sage, but aint ya both .. Many thanks Andy ... Neville

                • L. B. Mek

                  I'm gona 'choose' to just tiptoe around the deeper and darker possible meaning to your write, blink my ignorance over your words and simply state,
                  some of the most treasured memories I have been gifted in my life: involved a woman who angelical deigned to intrust her love within my fickle heart and a white button-up business shirt - ruffled around the collar, cos before she 'chose' to pick it up - it was all tapped-out...
                  a great write my friend, back to those deceptively subtle write's that only your insightfully witty imagination can conjure-up!

                  • Neville



                    Ah' but you have such a nice way with words my friend .. and I can't thank you enough for these ...... Neville

                  • Christina8

                    Yummy.....

                    • Neville



                      ................ You have such good taste Christina8 and I thank you for it ............. Seasons Greetings to You & Yours... Stay safe n well out there............... Neville

                      • Christina8

                        Seasosns Greetings to You and Yours!!



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