cold winter twilight:
one lonely dandelion
blooms in withered grass
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Robert Southwick Richmond (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I don't often write haiku, so I just followed the rules as described in Harold G. Henderson's An Introduction to Haiku, still the best book on the subject I've seen in 60 years. - Every day since the beginning of the pandemic I've posted a photo of a "Flower of the Day" and e-mailed it to fellow independent living residents in my retirement community in east Tennessee - mostly of flowers I've photographed right here on the grounds. This was yesterday's post.
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Good Haiku Robert.
Is Haiku French? (Note to self: Do shut up now Orchi. lol).
I never heard of haiku in French, but Wikipedia came to my rescue.
How do you count syllables in a French haiku? You pronounce all the normally unspoken vowels (including two syllables for l'eau, 'the water'), in their example, a translation of BashÅ's frog.
https://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ha%C3%AFku
Robert, I am not a technical writer, I just know what I like. And I do like both, the picture and the Haiku. Well done!
I tend to get technical about anything I write about. Pathologists do a lot of technical writing.
Haiku is Japanese. In tradition praise of a good one is to offer a humble link.
frostbitten dandelions
bloom for days
Indeed the haiku form is Japanese. I'm not convinced it can be reproduced in English, or any other European language.
Ah the relief! You exactly express my feelings - different language, totally different culture. What's left? Feel like miniature Edward FitzGeralds gone wrong, to me.
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Good Haiku. I write a great many Haiku and Senryu.
a wonderful haiku, capturing time, place and meaning: as glimpsed through nature's veil,
well executed
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