Smile

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you offer me a smile,

as though you haven’t just

stolen the very air from my atmosphere

and plunged me into a muffled world

under a dark blanket sea. my lips twitch

but I am too weak to pretend this time.

  • Author: hannah (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 20th, 2020 21:33
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 41
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  • Goldfinch60

    Good emotive write.

  • FredPeyer

    eli, thank goodness you were not too weak to write about it. Well done!!!

  • Clara

    There's almost an acceptance of sadness in this piece. You can feel the emotion but almost as if you're beginning to numb it... Great work.



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