you offer me a smile,
as though you haven’t just
stolen the very air from my atmosphere
and plunged me into a muffled world
under a dark blanket sea. my lips twitch
but I am too weak to pretend this time.
-
Author:
hannah (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 20th, 2020 21:33
- Category: Sad
- Views: 41
Offline)
Comments3
Good emotive write.
eli, thank goodness you were not too weak to write about it. Well done!!!
There's almost an acceptance of sadness in this piece. You can feel the emotion but almost as if you're beginning to numb it... Great work.
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.