Her words were touching and heartfelt
expressing feminine desire to once again
feel longed for shared passion of loving.
He spoke a cautious word of warning for
even in the most poetic places lurk predators.
How strange then, upon the very next day
found himself blocked from commenting upon
a predators poetry. How the cap fits.
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dusk arising (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The song is a favourite. Of all the pop type songs i gigged in various bands this is the one i most enjoyed playing (tenor sax). But there again, then there was modern Jazz.
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Good read Dusk. Have a happy Holiday and stay safe.
I like this poem... I like the song too! 🙂
Thank you. Good one. I kept coming back to it.
Good words d a and so true.
Wonderful music, that's going to be with me all day now!
Andy
yup, I understand - sometimes our differences seem insurmountable, especially since 'some' people's answer to open dialogue that remotely threatens the feeble foundation they've cocooned their life's upon: is to clasp their hands over their ears, glue tight their eyelids and dive into that pit of wilful ignorance, they've cultivated as their go-to survival state...
but hey, who are we to judge? who said our answers will yield a tomorrow that's any better...
still, I'm with you Dusk - at least in conversing we can better find a solution, as our alternative is digging ever-deeper in our carved-up trenches of society, flinging dirt at other's - while bathing daily: to rid ourselves of that taint of guilt, we bury too deep, to be witnessed by even those 'all knowing' eyes in our reflections...
good write my friend, utilising that frustration to weave words of love and compassion, is the Artform within recycling, well executed!
(also like 'Nor ordinary love' and 'Jezebel' from Sade's cannon, to me she'll always be 'Pop music's': Elizabeth Browning)
if I am reading this correctly you more than adequately poetise something quite despicable .. if I have got the wrong end of the stick ...then feel free to block me ...
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