Lifted at the hips so my gown drags upon the floor
Desperate for relief you bring the ice to my core
With a shuddering sigh I lean back upon our rest
Allowing you to feel the heat of my skin, notice the sweat between my breasts
Your hands so sure and confident ease my weakened legs
My panting breath fills the silence
We need not speak to hear my wanting release
I repeat your name, a plea
Almost fervently
You dip your head and see
How I'm ready for thee
The sheets beneath me dampen
My loosened breath
Back arched with each swell and each crest
You murmur your encouragement between each breath
I continue to cry out with a thunderous heart
Ball my fists into your shortened black hair
You say sweet girl, you're almost there
My head falls back as my core contracts
Wet and tender, you bring me my release
We cry out together, what a relief
This love we created together.
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Author:
Clara Ipsum (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A friend of mine on MPS recently commented that they still often turn to my poem 'Our Crescendo' which I wrote over a year ago now. This made me incredibly happy and inspired this little number above, a homage to my previous poem as well as 'His Masterpiece'.
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we are hardly ever more vulnerable than in these moments of pure intimacy and trust
Very true. Thank you for stopping by and commenting 🙏
Wonderful intimate poem full of pure love Clara.
Andy
Always appreciated Andy, thank you.
Good write Clara.
Oohh, it's too much for me - swoon! heehee. Erotica? Should I try some? 'Get my hat and coat, and get out more?' as they say. lol.
Thank you for stopping by Orchidee... You'll certainly need your hat and coat in this weather, as well as a mask, so maybe stay indoors for now hehe!
Thanks Clara. Erm, I was thinking of the 'erotica' aspect. There's the saying, if we have a sheltered life, to 'get our coat, and get out more' - see more of life. Should I try some erotica? lol.
problem with the general perception of anything titled erotic, is that we automatically tilt our corrupted mind's to that seedy underbelly of (nature gifted) physical attraction,
when in actuality write's like yours, penned with measured imagery (pointedly choosing not to indulge in too much of that 'crude', we find so satisfying to shock other's with) and dedication to those subtle nuances within that universal language of electrifying intimacy between willing participants of never-ending skin conversations: speaks of love - in its raw purest form, with more clarity than most poems dare tiptoe - around...
sorry for penning yet another self-indulgent tangent on your page - in the guise of a 'comment', if its any conciliation you can take all the credit/blame for inspiring my feeble scribbles, lol
thanks for sharing a wonderful read Clara
Wow, I appreciate such detailed comments on my poem! I certainly didn't want this poem to come across in anyway crude. I hoped it would portray raw passion, vulnerability and love between two people. I attempted to hint at subject while perhaps giving an alternative storyline - childbirth. Giving full interpretation to the reader. Thank you so much for your comments - overjoyed.
Sublime.
The unwritten truth of sharing love expressed as i have never seen before. Mesmerising - real.
You explore the beauty within the physical here.
I came back to this because i want it in my fav's. Its quite exceptional.
Thank you so much Dusk! I'm overjoyed with your comments and to add it to your favourites too! Made my day.
I'm so pleased you saw the beauty in this one and not just the sexual undertones. Thanks again! 😊
nice. I was almost there with you, a good draw in.
Thank you 🙏
Clara, your eloquent words express the meaning of 'making love' beautifully! And it ends on the exact right note. Well done!
Thank you kindly Sir 🙏
I'm pleased you enjoyed it - and I'm happy I did the subject matter justice!
Take care 😊
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