I've had a rhyme in my mind for quite some time
Showing life is a cartoon or movie of stories combined
Like a diamond in the rough or street rat to some
Making a wish to the universe only three will come
For everywhere the sun touches this kingdom is ours
With all the legends of old looking down from the stars
In a wonderful phrase that has no passing crazy
Up high in the atmosphere where all the air is clear
You'll find many ways to get the wisdoms of tears
Never to be lost in the landscape of a drifting rock
No longer waiting for that raging river to be crossed
Letting go of fear as calming waters whisper in your ear
Within an opening frequency only you can hold dear
Life is our gift playing out on a stage, endlessly scribing to find better days!
This is my next edition on my soulful page, even if none can listen!
You can't take a ripple away together we become a tidal wave..
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Things are definitely moving up and I got a call at the end of last week because a lady was at her whits end! She was using a local trainer from Brighton but got told by another dog walker to give me a call as it's been said I can work miracles..... After hearing all the misguided advice she was given, I popped straight over the next day... Emotions were discussed and let go off, then we just thought dog... It has now just done its first night with us and I've been up from 3am! So grateful to help shape this ripple from the beginning and blessed to be given the trust of another beautiful human being... All trying our best to be empowering and be inspired though truthfully connecting!
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Those 'better days' have certainly come your way Dan and in the life you now have each day will be better than the day before.
Wonderful words Dan.
Andy
When it's good it's gooood and when it's bad I get sad! Now I know it's okay to be all of the above and more, thanks for always giving your outstanding support!!
Hope you have a wonderful week and look forward to bobbing along with you in the River next year!
'but got told by another dog walker to give me a call as it's been said I can work miracles.....' (if I say so myself), lol
nothing more rewarding than to see a good person rise and rise again, as many times as it takes! own that power of self-worth and pride: earned outright, from having overcome all the obstacles in their lives and knowing - they're now well equipped for all the future stumbles that await...
more power to you Dan!
keep singing your song and sharing all that positivity you've mind from within...
Happy holidays dear Poet, stay safe and revel - indulgently, in your well earned rewards of 'innocent minds, looking-up at you with contagious: carefree smiles'
My man! You see me so clearly and I am going to keep this pride and self worth into next year.... This is no ego trip but truly showing all my scars are painted with a positive tip, ready for lifes next trip!
Many your reflection of all you see be all that you need to succeed!
Into next year and all after
Keep up the write
Always appreciate your time
Awww, I just knew you'd be able to do it - deal with that doggy. The sweetest doggies in that clip - dachshund and the others! 🙂
Bless you my friend they we an absolute pleasure to help keep the peace and just find more with in me...
Hope you have a wonderful Christmas in all the glorious way you can see the world!
Much peace and respect
Good read. Have a Happy Holiday and Stay Safe.
Thank you kind sir and I wish the same to you, I like to say.. stay savvy! Still written on my window from march, I think I may do a poem to that (thanks for the inspiration)
My life is like a long holiday, I absolutely live & breathe my work!
Song lyrics "everyday is a vacation if you love your occupation"
Thank you again for your time!
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
this is so good and on so many levels ... the fact someone recommended you to another made me smile... and the subsequent post you pinned to this page has helped to hold it there ... Seasons Best sir Dan .................... Neville
I actually helped customer look for the list dog many moons back, while doing that I handed my card to a random walker to give me a call if he sees it!
Few months went by and I got my first recommended from him and it so got back of how much I'd helped compared to the lady trainer!!
This is now a fourth one from me just helping someone else, it tells me that no matter how much effort I put into videos or advertising!!
Life will always find away, if you build it they will come in the end!
Always appreciate your time my friend
true words indeed ........................... and thank you again Dan ..
Poetically emotional.
Well done
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