Turbulence.
Shallow drapes of soft-lit cirrus
billowed and barred like wind in silk hems
vertically swaying.
Glimpses of cracks in blackness
grew into Gods dancing at whim with satin
streamers waving.
The greenish-white curves
in pre-dawn sky were at once unnerving
and yet exciting.
Northern Lights in a modest
display made the heart leap when lit darts
cue to start colliding.
Firmament turbulence produces
fluorescence which leaves viewers gasping
with plans to come back
again and again
and
again.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: As I am still nursing a sprained shoulder and typing is painful this is an airing of a verse I wrote earlier - do hope you enjoy.
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Comments5
Good write Fay.
Get well soon, and come back again and again and....!
take time to heal correct, that is one cherished talent you possess, lol
a wondrously immersive write Fay
Good Read. Have a Happy Holiday. Stay Safe and Well
I'm never afraid to say your words never fail captivate me, much like I imagine the sight would!
I had to skip abit, then told my self off and tried again to slow my brain down! So I'll thank you again for the way only you can put it down!
Sorry to read in your notes that your not doing to good, I hope the spirit I feel inside you heals you up as well as your mind flows!
My last read of the evening! Perfect pick, may the dreams we feel being the soul to heal!
All the best for next year & beyond!
Wonderful words Fay, may we continue to gasp at the beauty that is around us.
I hope you get better soon and be able to write more of your beautiful words.
Andy
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