You are still able to make me cry, but when I cry, I will cry boiling water ejected at your face.
You are still able to make me bleed, but when I bleed, I will bleed molten brass on your feet.
You are still able to knock me down, but when I fall, I will fall as a boulder on your rib cage.
You are still able to break my bones, but when my bones become broken, they will be rebuilt in better and stronger shape.
You are still able to make me fall to my knees, but when I fall to my knees, I will enjoy an Absorbing, Long-Lasting Prayer.
- Author: Samer Amin ( Offline)
- Published: December 27th, 2020 02:02
- Category: Sad
- Views: 23
Comments4
Each time we are taken down in any way we can rebuild into a stronger person and move on into a better life Samer. Wise words.
Andy
Thank you Andy, you have inspired me to write a short poem related to your profound comment:
You have resurrected me.
You commanded me to move the chunks of debris aside and get out of my grave.
You commanded me to stand up upright and keep going my way.
You taught me that the rebirth of the far more stronger new creation, can not be delivered, except through the darkness of the horrific pains of the womb of sadness.
Thank your Samer, each problem we overcome makes us stronger.
Anduy
Yep, each problem make us......... as Gold says.
One problem is getting away from me singing. You'll feel better if you do, no doubt! heehee.
Thank you so much for emphasizing this important theme. It is so amazing that we could observe some great people in history, not just were remodeled or recreated by hardships and suffering, but they were also able to turn their anguish into enchanting melodies and ageless fine arts.
Well said.
Thank you! Your encouraging words mean a lot to me.
Change cannot be stopped. Only by change do we grow. Oftentimes change comes through pain. We don't like to think about that.
Thank you so much for your insightful remark.
I think you mean, it is essentially the birth-pains that could get the stronger creature out of the vulnerable one.
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