Black Vortex

Samer Amin

 

 

 

To be a victim of hatred and rejection, can feel like the resolute unwavering steps of approaching doom.


 

 

To be a victim of hatred and rejection, can feel like a soul tries hopelessly to cling to its original abode.

 

 

To be a victim of hatred and rejection, can feel like a soul thrown away from its true identity by an alienating blast.

 

 

To be a victim of hatred and rejection, can feel like a black vortex leads to a bottomless pit, grows wild, and asks for its due share of the damned soul.

 

 

To be a victim of hatred and rejection, can feel like the everlasting hellish dankness that would be the perpetual residency of the deplorable soul.

 

 

To be a victim of hatred and rejection, can feel like an eternity about to be spent in close proximity of an Abusive Mate.

 

  • Author: Samer Amin (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 31st, 2020 03:00
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Comments3

  • Goldfinch60

    Powerful write Samer.

    Am I reading the last stanza as this is what has happened to you or am I misinterpreting it?

    Andy

    • Samer Amin

      Actually, I always try honestly to reflect my personal experience into my poems, because I believe that reflecting personal experience is an indispensable ingredient that can create an atmosphere of sincerity around any piece of literature.
      Thank you so much for your caring and for your insightful remark.

    • orchidee

      Good write Samer.

      • Samer Amin

        Thank you so much, your encouraging words are always able to make my day seem better.

        • orchidee

          Thanks Samer. Yet we may secretly like to hate sometimes maybe. A sneaky thought or two that, well, not actual harm come to someone, but a bit of misfortune, and say 'That'll teach them!' Or 'pick holes' in some people that we may not like. But then surely we only move ourselves nearer that vortex then.

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        • Jerry Reynolds

          Good Read Samer. To Andy's point.
          Just for the fun of it. Re-write one of your poems leaving yourself out so the reader can feel it happening to themself. Remove the refuge of empathy.

          • Samer Amin

            Thank you for your constructive feedback.That's right. We can make a poem more related to others by removing its ego-centrism, or its first person high-light, since this might add a lot to its resonance with others.



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