Eternally Yours

Christina8

I was lying in the fetal,

begging to be a memory--

But you saw worth

You saw potential in me.

 

Thank you for being part

of my life, my story

You gave me hope in a void

In my darkest hour you were there for me

 

I remember a time when

life had no color scheme.

Drained from all it's worth,

It was becoming a regular theme.

 

Now I see brightly lit skies!

My senses are tickled and more

You've rescued me from the abyss

And I will be thankful evermore!

  • Author: Christina (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 3rd, 2021 19:46
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just a quick scribble, I guess this is open to interpretation...
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 82
  • User favorite of this poem: Poetic Dan.
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Comments9

  • Goldfinch60

    Very good emotive words Christina.

    Andy

    • Christina8

      Thanks so much Andy!

    • orchidee

      Good write Christina.
      I will swoon if too much 'tickling''! lol.

      • Christina8

        LOL Thank you orchidee!!

      • Poetic Dan

        I don't lie and thoses first few lines made me cry... Thank you for sharing so openly and raw!

        I hope you have a good year & beyond because your worth it!

        • Christina8

          Thank you so much for your review and favorite save! I also hope you have a good year as well, Dan! Much respect--Christina

        • dusk arising

          I'm reading that, just when u don't expect it, love comes along and zaps you between the eyes..... which is really quite lovely in your words.

          • Christina8

            Thank you very much DA! You made me smile! 🙂

          • Suresh

            Your poetic words are a ray of hope

            • Christina8

              Thank you so much, Suresh, for reading my poem!!

            • Neville


              This is without any doubt whatsoever, my most favouritest Christina8 poem to date ...

              Neville

              • Christina8

                Really?? I am so glad you liked it Neville! It brings a smile to my face to hear! Thanks again!--C

              • Fay Slimm.

                So pleased I caught this little gem of honest confession with a very moving theme - - that opening stanza brought tears to my eyes - - thanks for posting it dear Christina. -

                • Christina8

                  Thank you Fay, that really means a lot to me!--Christina

                • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

                  Lovely poem ‘ now I see brightly lit skies ‘ nice words ..

                  • Christina8

                    Thank you so much yellow, I really appreciate it!!!

                  • sally

                    great poem, i like it : )

                    • Christina8

                      Thank you sally for visiting my page. Have a great day!!

                      • sally

                        my pleasure dear : ) !



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