I was lying in the fetal,
begging to be a memory--
But you saw worth
You saw potential in me.
Thank you for being part
of my life, my story
You gave me hope in a void
In my darkest hour you were there for me
I remember a time when
life had no color scheme.
Drained from all it's worth,
It was becoming a regular theme.
Now I see brightly lit skies!
My senses are tickled and more
You've rescued me from the abyss
And I will be thankful evermore!
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 3rd, 2021 19:46
- Comment from author about the poem: Just a quick scribble, I guess this is open to interpretation...
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Comments9
Very good emotive words Christina.
Andy
Thanks so much Andy!
Good write Christina.
I will swoon if too much 'tickling''! lol.
LOL Thank you orchidee!!
I don't lie and thoses first few lines made me cry... Thank you for sharing so openly and raw!
I hope you have a good year & beyond because your worth it!
Thank you so much for your review and favorite save! I also hope you have a good year as well, Dan! Much respect--Christina
I'm reading that, just when u don't expect it, love comes along and zaps you between the eyes..... which is really quite lovely in your words.
Thank you very much DA! You made me smile! 🙂
Your poetic words are a ray of hope
Thank you so much, Suresh, for reading my poem!!
This is without any doubt whatsoever, my most favouritest Christina8 poem to date ...
Neville
Really?? I am so glad you liked it Neville! It brings a smile to my face to hear! Thanks again!--C
So pleased I caught this little gem of honest confession with a very moving theme - - that opening stanza brought tears to my eyes - - thanks for posting it dear Christina. -
Thank you Fay, that really means a lot to me!--Christina
Lovely poem ‘ now I see brightly lit skies ‘ nice words ..
Thank you so much yellow, I really appreciate it!!!
great poem, i like it : )
Thank you sally for visiting my page. Have a great day!!
my pleasure dear : ) !
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