For many reasons I want to write this but quite a few angles makes it hard to pick which!
I do feel we overload ourselves with expectation and normal rely on others for self reflection.
To know if I have good knowledge, I endlessly study to have greater grades. If I wish to be happy and secure, then all bills are paid and I'll sit on a perch of all the rest saved!
This process has done remarkably well, sent us to space and the ability to communicate instantly over the world...
Yet the balance from natures true test we've let dift to a point that our minds forget, the power we all have to create and manifest!
To roam with a dog grounds you back to the beginning, when walking in sync you receive natural healing!
When you clear the mind, moving with the only purpose and intent to keep the peace: no anger or judgement just an unwavering spirit that can't be beat.
Yet instead of truly gaining the knowledge from their test, we see them as less and make shows and carry them around still looking for that freedom we want, or sadly the love from another human but can't commit to the growth only heart ache can get!
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Just finished and couldn\\\'t pick a title name, me & the wife have to move out the house by the 11th and left her 14 years of living to pack up in a week, on top of that a new car we got broke down, plus all other things that can go on in life are! To the point I asked a friend to see if there was any tyre fitting jobs! Part of me says the only way for me to get better results with dogs is cut more to the point, this should change their life as it did mine.... Hope this reads alright, always appreciate your time
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I'm sorry to read you are having a tough time at the moment. Shit happens and really tests us. You know you have the love of the family unit around you though, imagine if you were alone with all that going on.
I think you identify well the inner peace to be found when detaching from the hum-drum and hustle of city life and let your mind relax into your surroundings. I know it works for me and several others on here. Some have found a contact with the life force, the creator spirit, in this way. A way which was there long before christian churches interfered with our natural spirituality with all their mumbo jumbo.
Stay safe and don't lose sight of the fact that you will be on the other side of problems before long and this pandemic will also end.
Sincere best wishes to you and yours at this time my friend.
I don't live in the so called "3rd" world so I will take this time to get to know my in laws and do anything they need! I am safe and mostly warm 😉
Reading your sentiments always helps my soul... Thanks for joining me on my trip!
Moving is a huge stress, be careful and stay safe.
Yeah but really looking forward to the end result.. Just needed to stay mentally stable lol!
Always appreciate your time
'For many reasons I want to write this but quite a few angles makes it hard to pick which!
I do feel we overload ourselves with expectation and normal rely on others for self reflection.'
I would suggest some 75% of sincere Poetry may began with these thoughts you've versed so accessibly: relatable.
A wonderful write dear Poet,
I'm sorry you're experiencing one of life's 'sharp slaps' of fate.
Still, I have faith in the wisdom you exemplify within your rhymes of shared solace,
I'm certain you possess the ability to unfurl realisable avenues for managing this obstacles before you,
and I look forward to reading the fruits they will yield, once you've found that safe place to land,
if I you permit me to share my two scents worth of 'learned through mistake' - insight:
remember to share a simple joke or pick a flower or simply offer a hug, to that treasured someone(s) by your side
even in the most challenging of times, for in simply appreciating the gift - that is their presence in your life,
you will remind yourself - that yes their may still be worse to come,
but still, you possess some treasures other's can only dream of...
keep the faith my friend, sing your song even in the face of that bleak that threatens to swallow you whole: sing it loud and unashamedly Proud!
Truly blessed to receive your vibration and feel that encouraging energy to never lose the spirit to sing and dance no matter the melody...
Right now my funk is on.... We are family, Poetic minds running free...
Always appreciated
The positive power that you have have found over recent times will be the strength that you now have to live your life in a great ways despite the obstacles that come your way Dan.
Your life WILL be good.
Andy
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