im truly lost
yet all others see is
striving
resilience
hard-work
meanwhile im falling into
my very own abyss
of self critique
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Author:
caitlinn02 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: My first poem
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Comments2
Good words caitlinn, being self critical can take us to strange places, we may do things wrong and be critical about them but those errors are part of our experience of life so use that experience to move forward as experience cannot be taught.
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Thankyou!
Nice flow caitlinn, haha you use the same technique as me for dealing with issues, poeticising the experience and tracing something from it.
A good entrance, hope to see more of your work.
J
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