Kept away from all the truth , all the whispers hurt my head had to read between the lines ... So insecure behind my door in my head .. I was loved I was wanted ... but somewhere inbetween i got lost . Not on purpose , just misplaced . Lost feeling absent .. I thought everything had a place ... but where was mine ? Where did i belong ? Insecure no open doors , curled up in a ball upon the floor . Confused and scared , was I ever really heard .. Just misplaced like a forgotton toy .
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You are not only heard, you are read too! Wonderful writing that makes one think.
Thankyou FredPeyer
Never misplaced Julie you are here with your words and are part of life.
Andy
Thankyou for your lovely reply Andy
an enjoyable read,
but I cant help thinking you stopped your chain of thoughts a little early, if you continued to question and hypothesise those underlying causes for how you're feeling, sooner than later: you'll find a more firm ground of self-realisation to end your words on,
any worthwhile answers to those governing questions in our lives are usually mined from within,
just gota dig a little deeper to find that well of wisdom we have been accruing with each sharp turn or stumble of life
Thankyou so much . You are right In what you say . I did lose my chain of thought ... looking back on my Poem. Iam going to re-write it . Hopefully it will be more depth in it .
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