BEAUTY AND MUSIC

starman74

She sat at the piano and played a sombre tune

Her pale body near translucent made so by the moon 

Raven hair dropped forward, neck curved so she could see 

Her dancing hands and fingers move across the keys

With loaded blood and heavy eyes I lay there as she played 

Lost both in her beauty and the music I began to drift away

When the room fell silent, I opened up my eyes 

There she knelt as I felt her hand take hold of mine

I opened up my arms as she folded into me

It was there we stayed where we lay sharing the same dream  

 

  • Author: Starman (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 10th, 2021 10:57
  • Category: Love
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  • Robert Southwick Richmond

    Because of the fairly formal diction of this poem, I'll note line 4: should be moved (tense of the other verbs in the poem).

    The past tense of lie ('recline") is lay.

  • Goldfinch60

    The two glories of wonder, music and love, within your words make it so wonderful.

    Andy

  • starman74

    Thanks for pointing out the mistake I made with lay Robert I will correct that Cheers. Going to leave the poem as it is it fell that way and I’m not to big on structure. Cheers

  • starman74

    Thank you Andy you summed it up perfectly. Glad you enjoyed it.

  • L. B. Mek

    'Her pale body near translucent made so by the moon',
    wonderfully unique and vivid imagery you've utilised throughout your write, a really enjoyable read,
    thanks for sharing

    • starman74

      Thanks very much for your kind and encouraging words



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