Awareness.
Quiet's comfort, revealed by care
begets ease of flow
from fear that silence will appear
between wordy souls
and tighten portals of interchange
yet speechless may calm
while when gentle generates ease
hurtful moments start
to melt for regret weeds out stress
then stillness returns
to dissipate pain and scatter seeds
of relationship's curse
as forgiving aids love's awareness.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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there is more truth contained here than is fair to most non fiction writers .. and your summative line is more than insightful ... it is enlightening ...
'while when gentle generates ease
hurtful moments start
to melt for regret weeds out stress
then stillness returns
to dissipate pain and scatter seeds
of relationship's curse
as forgiving aids love's awareness.'
just a drip of your daily writing routine these words may be, but they reach deep to those unspoken words of regret I carry with me, what a wonderful gift you share with us dear Fay, beautifully worded
Good write Fay.
The words of love enriching understanding and acceptance. But told in your exquisite style.
Again, to write like this, one has to have lived it.
Wonderful words Fay, may that love's awareness be forever with us.
Andy
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