Reasons for Leaving

Neville

Reasons for Leaving

 

Surely it must be time to leave

When all these bits of nothing

Amount to something quite so big

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 19th, 2021 04:29
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments7

  • Fay Slimm.

    One way of dealing with build-ups as you so tellingly describe here my friend. - or alternatively this could provide a reason for talking - -- maybe.............x

    • Neville



      ..................... I think maybe you could be write ... no maybe's about me thanking you tho' .. tis a done deal ........... thank you Fay ... x

    • Goldfinch60

      So few words for such emotion.

      Andy

      • Neville



        ..................... when my imagination gets the better of me.. sometimes the pen takes over .. bless you Andy ..

      • Doggerel Dave

        You aren't doing a Marie Kondo here are you ??

        Dave

        • Neville



          .. I'm so far behind, I hadn't even heard of her until I read your comment twice and Googled .. ta though DD

          Neville

          • Doggerel Dave

            Meant to be sly, Nev - I was sure it wasn't about decluttering worldly goods really!

            Dave

          • L. B. Mek

            Ugh! That time - yet again...
            'when rose petal words
            are poisoned
            by yesterdays misspoken tone
            and a romance
            once fated to bloom
            a life time, now
            stares back: Snag,
            while all around
            couples swivel - in-step
            to their pulsed
            lifetime soundtrack
            of unending Spring delights'
            thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply my friend,
            a great write you've shared,
            words depicting that heartachingly morose moment of belated realisation with incision accuracy and insightful brevity

            • Neville



              ............................. what can this old fella say except a BIG THANK YOU my friend ....

            • dusk arising

              Reminded me of a poem i wrote ages ago:-

              when u find
              she's not the one
              and grow tired
              of the things she's done
              then the time is here
              to make it right
              if its gone so wrong
              move along tonight

              But there again i could have got a hold of the wrong end of the stick.

              • Neville



                ................... I am delighted that these words triggered such a recollection ... great minds eh' ... and thank you DA .................

              • orchidee

                Good write N. I gotta meet her first, let alone leaving her! lol.

                • Neville



                  .................. that kinda makes sense .. maybe .. Cheers Orchidee ...

                • jarcher54

                  There's a story there... or do we each imagine we know what this refers to from our own experience? Sort of the opposite of sound and fury signifying nothing?

                  • Neville


                    ......................... Maybe .................... thanks for checking in and considering these words ... you make a good point ...



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